The Coldest Heart

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  1. ♥AL90♥ Hollow Bastion Committee

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    What???

    Yeah... Were you talking to me because my story's been posted already for those who want to read it.

    To Just A nobody,

    Your story's great! I like every bit of it!!! There's only one part I don't understand, what was up with those parts where Roxas and Sora were like basically saying they liked each other. It was funny but gay.:eek: :confused:
     
  2. Explode Who?!

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    This was a really enjoyable story, although to be quite honest, the language wasn't all that advanced. It was good considering it was written in 20 minutes, but you should have spent more time on it...oh well. CONGRATS ANYWAY!

    (Geez people, you don't have to SAY that you're not gay: a straight person is perfectly capable of enjoying a story about two guys in love as long as it's a good one, just like any other story.)
     
  3. kairi0707 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Seriously. XD
     
  4. JustANobody Twilight Town Denizen

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    I sorry. I would've worked on it more if I hadn't had to go to school and cut it off. x.x
     
  5. kairi0707 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Write more NOW!!! Sorry. *laughs uncertainly* Didn't mean to be so demanding.
     
  6. Maru-malu Moogle Assistant

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    Post More Now!!

    Your story is so nice!!! For some reason RoxasxSora is my fav couple so continue the story.... And post more!!! You better...:)
     
  7. JustANobody Twilight Town Denizen

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    Oi! I figured it was about time I got this story up and runnin' again! I'm soo lazy...~ lol xD

    What Will He Do?


    Physical Education.

    Both loved and hated,by both of the boys.

    Loved because hey,they got some fighting practice in,and they got to see eachother.Not to mention being able to show off in front of the girls and still be the same person.

    Unfortunately,that was also all the reason why it was hated.

    "Oi! Watch where you're going!" Sora said. The class was playing basketball today, and Roxas had just bumped into Sora. Naturally making the ball bounce out of Sora's hand, and out of bounds. The coach's whistle blew.

    "Out of bounds, Sora's team!" he yelled. As if it weren't obvious enough.

    Yeah. They were competitive.

    The game went on for, what seemed like, forever. Sora and Roxas were the entire show. They always tried to, and usually succeeded in, stealing the ball from the other. The guys on their teams just sat back. Confused and not wanting to get in their way. Eventually, the coach's whistle told everyone that it was time to get ready for next class.

    The locker room was an interesting place. It's no different in the guys', either. Sora and Roxas would occasionally glance at eachother, while the other was looking away. Their cheeks couldn't help but turn a slight pink.

    Oh, God. He's undressing. was the most commonly used thought for that hour. Eventually, they would get used to it. Eventually. ...right?

    "Hey, Sora!"

    Sora turned around, his name being called. It was Roxas.

    "Hey, sorry about what happened." Roxas said, making eye contact.

    "No problem. I mean, yeah you did knock me out of bounds. But at least I got to see the expression on your face when you made that shot and the ball got stuck between the hoop and backboard." Sora grinned triumphantly.

    "Hey, that wasn't my fault. I, uh, was focused on the fact that the girls were watching." Roxas stuttered.

    "Yeah, they were watching; after you got the ball stuck." Sora grinned yet again. Roxas blushed even more. Sora turned away and began to walk to his next class, when Roxas once again stopped him.

    "H-Hey, Sora?"

    "Hmm?" Sora stopped in his tracks, and looked back at the boy.

    "Could you, uhm..." his voice trailed off. Sora cocked his head, curious of what the blonde was trying to say.

    "Would you mind, if you came over today after school?" Roxas finally was able to speak. It wasn't straight and to-the-point, as he had invisioned it. It was loud, shakey, and quite nervous. Sora laughed at the boy's cuteness in his actions.

    "Sure, buddy!" he said, smiling brightly.

    "Great! See ya after school then!" Roxas said, then hurried to his next class. Sora, realizing the time, did the same.

    Where will this go to?


    YAAAAYz I DID IT!!! ~
     
  8. C This silence is mine

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    Yeah this story is pretty good =D