Digital Art the bloody broken aweakening

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Shinichi Izumi, Nov 7, 2011.

  1. Shinichi Izumi Totally Pink and stuff

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    Cnc please, its 5 seconds of your life and you get +1 posts...

    so cnc please =D
     
  2. Stella Nox Fleuret Hollow Bastion Committee

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    You are really improving. This is actually really good.

    The gradient is nice, but I would like it if they was more effects. But on it's own, it is really good. *is running out of good words*
     
  3. Shinichi Izumi Totally Pink and stuff

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    the image is very dark and with a transparent background, so i could not put many effects, but thanks =d
     
  4. Daxa~ #stalker

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    Its interesting,I will give you that.
    The colours at the top of it are nice,but to me at least,it just doesnt work well with the much darker at the bottom.
    Possibly either lighten up the bottom of it,and darken the top?
    But the actual shape of the whole thing is nice,and the idea is good.
    With just a bit of tweaking maybe,it shall be lovely.
    Good work though dear~
     
  5. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    It's nice, however it's a bit plain and could be much better if more detail was included at the top.
    Also, as Daxa stated, the red part of the gradient doesn't really go well with the darker parts of the under sections.
    Other than that it's quite nice and it's obvious you are improving.
    Keep it up.
     
  6. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    It's not bad.

    The red kind of throws it off considering where it's from (Birth By Sleep when we see Ven's broken awakening during his opening cutscene) but I can understand the black part being lost. Also, why red and not white? Did you just want to scrap the white altogether or did you like Vanitas' colors?

    You really didn't do much to it (recoloring the center) but the stock was at least good quality, and the outline of the top is still intact. Overall, not bad gabr.
     
  7. Shinichi Izumi Totally Pink and stuff

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    thank you daxa, next time i will try more... =D

    yesm i tryed vanitas'ses colors,

    thanks