The Affinities

Starseeker, your posts are unclear.

Andrew fumed as somehow both Jo and Ariana had teleported from the safe place he had placed them at, back to the unsafe battlefield. OKAY YOU KNOW WHAT FINE. thought Andrew angrily as continued through the tunnels. He so wanted to block the tunnel passageway just to condemn to their fates, but decided not to. It was too cruel and mean. BUT SO HELP ME. IF THOSE SOLDIERS START COMING HERE I WILL BLOCKADE THIS B*TCH. "Okay guys, I've got a better idea on how to do this quickly and efficiently. No pushing or shoving and stay calm all right? All right," said Andrew to the kids hastily, still pissed about the remaining "freedom fighters". He lifted his hand palm up and the earth they were walking on lifted all the kids with it. Running through the tunnels with the floating earth, Andrew made it out with everyone and deposited them safely onto the ground. As he was running, he could feel Jellal falling to the ground and having trouble, as well as the two ******ed kids who had first decided to fight back trailing behind. he would've gone back to protect Jellal, but Ulrich had beaten him to it. And needless to say he wasn't pleased that he too was fighting back. But he did leave them alive. So I guess that's a good point. "Everyone safe? We've got to travel a good distance. I know another safe place. Assuming that place wasn't found out either. We'll rest for the night here, the invading force is diminished and retreating. Ah right...hang on a sec," he told the group of kids. Andrew got into a solid stance and stomped on the ground again, raising a wall of earth around the group. He then made a roof and sunk it into the ground a bit. Their temporary hideout now looked like a little hill. "Ah Jesus....you guys....are too much work," he sighed as he collapsed onto a knee. He was now thoroughly exhausted from using his earth magic to do big things in one day. "Haley. I'm entrusting you to give the stragglers hell when they come back. All right? I'm going to bed now."

 

Ariana looked and Ulrich and then at Jell-who was passed out. She sighed "At least you two are both alive...."

 

Ulrich nodded and set Jellal beside Jo. The earth-user exhaled and fell flat on his rump. "Man, he was heavy," he remarked, taking a breather. "I suppose we can take a break for a moment."

 

"I really don't know. Sorry" Haley anwered Maddie honestly, she hated to see her friend looking so weak but she didn't know what she could do. Though before she could say much more, Andrew decided to help them out. She could barely believe what Andrew did to move them but after a day like she'd had, few things would suprise her. As much as she found it wierd and scary, she was relieved. She didn't know what she'd have done if she'd had to carry Caeli all this way, she was struggling to hold him as it was. He was as big as her, probably bigger, definatly heavier. As they moved she kept up the supportive words to everyone, she needed them all to stay strong. She was well aware what they were going through, though she knew that this was only the beginning. When they arrived, she laid Caeli down on the ground carefully befor walking over to Andrew. She was amazed at everything he'd done for them and simply didn't know what she'd have done if he hadn't happened to return today.

She laughed when he asked her to help give them hell though, she was happy he trusted her. "Okay. Although I'm still working on 'giving hell', but I'll do my best. Thanks for all you've done for us. We owe you." She paused, a thought was still niggling at her from the back of her mind. "I'm sorry, but before you go to bed I want to know. When you went to see Jellal, please don't tell me you joined their stupid resistance." From his actions today, she was starting to doubt that he had but she had to be sure.

 

Caeli's eyes fluttered open. Seeing now that he was rescued and safe for now. He softly whispered a thank you, not thinking that whoever his rescuer was would hear him. He slowly closed his eyes again.

 

"Pffaaa....hahahahahahaha! Are you serious? Are you truly serious? You can't be. There's your answer. Ah wait a sec," laughed Andrew before he felt a presence sitting down on the ground far away. "Hmm. Looks like they're taking a break. I guess I have a little more power left to help them out once more. Ah, but I'm going to be sleeping for a long while. Hahaha..." laughed Andrew cynically as he stood up once more before kicking the ground, causing the earth beneath Ulrich, Jellal, Ariana and Jo to slide forward a great distance through the tunnels to be closer to the main group. After he kicked the earth, Andrew fell backwards and with his arms spread out wide. He closed his eyes and drifted off to sleep to replenish his energy.

 

ok 1 here you go
Name: Jaks Stylex
Age:15
Apperence: dark brown hae\ir very light brown skin brown orange red and blue are in his appearance, but his cloths are never the same
Affinity: unknown none his control seems to be of earth but displays control of fire and water, but not much
Bio: his history is very unclear before he was 5 but only a day after his 5th birthday did the humans attack his home but with seemingly no reason to because no magic was in his blood. the humans killed his parents and doing that they somehow made him angry enough to attack them but he couldent do a thing to harm him as his disrepair grew as he was to die, he unleashed his full elemental control killing the soldiers he has been in a coma for 10 years as this time passed he grew in strength and now has awaken and is trying to figure out the past of not only himself, but everyone connected to him
2 the 2nt one is not real (you will see)
3 as Jaks contenues to look for his past he meetsok 1 here you go
Name: Jaks Stylex
Age:15
Apperence: dark brown hae\ir very light brown skin brown orange red and blue are in his appearance, but his cloths are never the same
Affinity: unknown none his control seems to be of earth but displays control of fire and water, but not much
Bio: his history is very unclear before he was 5 but only a day after his 5th birthday did the humans attack his home but with seemingly no reason to because no magic was in his blood. the humans killed his parents and doing that they somehow made him angry enough to attack them but he couldent do a thing to harm him as his disrepair grew as he was to die, he unleashed his full elemental control killing the soldiers he has been in a coma for 10 years as this time passed he grew in strength and now has awaken and is trying to figure out the past of not only himself, but everyone connected to him
2 the 2nt one is not real (you will see)

 

Dude. Just have ONE character. You don't have to have a whole story starring your character. And just pick ONE element. It's not that hard.

 

Jellal's eyes slowly opened as he looked around. He was underground. Next to him were Ariana and Ulrich. From what he could gather, they must have saved him. He started to get up but fell straight back down due to the bullet wound in his ankle. "Dammit.." He said under his breathe.

 

OOC: Okay, forgive me. I'm having a really hard time figuring out your posts. Can you please be simple and chose one ONE element/affinity. From what I can see, his family and him weren't wizards/witches but for some reason soldiers killed his parents. This made him angry enough to awaken his affinity. He attacked them, killing the soldiers but overexerting himself to the point he fell into a coma. He has now awoken, with no memory of his past. He now wants to find out his past. Is that right?

Okay, I'm going to ignore the bit about something not being real and when you repeated yourself before things get too complicated. I'm okay with him not remebering his past and wanting to find out what it is, provided it doesn't take over the story and providing you don't power play/god mod and over power him. You can only have ONE affinity/element and he's the same stregnth as everyone else. Also I'm going to disregard your earlier posts due to the facts: they made little sense, you overpowered him, I don't want him randomly locked up and finally if he was 5 when he fell into a coma he wouldn't have a girlfriend. He also needs to be somewhere where he will meet up with everyone else.

But yeah, edit it slightly and I'd be willing to accept you.

BIC: Haley smiled in relief, that was one weight of her mind though she was pretty sure there would be more to replace it soon enough. She wondered for a second what he did when he kicked the ground, it was certainly more than she could see but she wasn't going to worry about that. She watched him fall to sleep happily before moving back towards the others. "Is everyone alright?" She asked as she sat down on the ground, "Get as much rest as you can, you'll need the energy. You all did great today but we're far from out of this mess. We'll need every one of you with full stregnth." She told them all.

She rubbed her head, she'd used a fair amount of energy back there too and it was taking it's toll however much she tried not to show it. Sheer determination to be strong for the others had got her this far but now she was feeling it. She needed as much rest as she could but she couldn't go to sleep just yet. She needed to make sure everyone was okay and then there was the matter of the ones who had stayed to fight. Andrew was depending on her. He'd told her to 'give them hell' but although they'd seriously annoyed her and she wasn't happy with them, she wasn't an angry person at the best of times. Plus she wasn't at full stregnth and one against four, she didn't rate her chances if it came to a fight. She knew she would fight them to stop this war but tonight, she just wanted to rest.

 

When Ulrich blinked, he felt the earth beneath and around him shift. When he opened his eyes, he found himself, Ariana, Jo, and Jellal to be caught up with the rest of the orphans. He shook his head, keeping quiet as he analyzed his surroundings. Ulrich sighed, picking himself up. He heard Jellal murmur something, but turned his attention to Haley. She was issuing a command, but Ulrich held his hand up.

"Sparkles over here is wounded..." he told her solemnly. "I don't really need to rest, either. I didn't do anything except usher the children in here with you all and carry both Jo and Emperor Maximus back from the battlefield. From what I've seen... the enemy is in full retreat, their men very few. We're safe for now." Ulrich gave her a lazy smile, the same smile he always wore, before walking over to Jo. He began to examine her, making sure she wasn't too wounded.

 

"I-I'll do whatever I can to help too," Ariana said poping up from behind Ulrich. She felt bad-really bad. Andrew had helped them twice and they had taken it for granted. Now She had to make up for it-and make sure it never happened ever again.

 

Jo's sleep shattered and she opened her eyes slowly, adjusting to the dim light of the tunnels. She noticed Ulrich standing over her and growled, "Touch me and I'll break your hands." She stomach growled at her and she slapped a hand to her bare midrif. Her clothes weren't suited to anything but the heat of a volcanoe. Her red shirt didn't even bother extending past her ribs and her red shorts ended at her thighs. Her jacket was the only thing that kept her covered up, but that was no where to be found. Her plain white scarf tied around her neck hung limply down her back. Sliding up the wall, Jo stood unsteadily for a few moments before her balance came back. "Where are we? What happened to the soldiers?"

 

Ulrich fell back in surprised. "Ack!" he yelped, crawling away backwards. "Don't scare me like that!" Ulrich whimpered. Scary lady is scary... he thought. With a deep breath, Ulrich shook his head. "The soldiers... oh! Sparkles over there," he snickered at his own wit as he pointed to Jellal. "He sent them packing, wounding over half of their men. He's very impressive and scary." Ulrich said, smiling that lazy smile.

 

Ariana breathed a sigh of relief as Jo woke up. "I'm happy to see your okay," She said, smiling at her 'partner in crime'

 

Once the giant dome was placed around them, Keel released the barrier seeing as this dome would hopefully keep them safe until morning. "A little tired that's all." Moving to the side of the dome, he sat down and began to rest on the wall, but beofre he could completly get ot sleep, one thought ran through his head. Should I tell them that I'm part of the resistance, or wait and hope for the best.

 

Jo snarled, "So just because he takes out one little group of soldiers, he's the all-powerful one of you all? Pathetic... I've taken out seven cities worth of armies. I didn't think I was powerful or scary after that...I thought I was a murderer..." She frowned at her hands and then pulled her pistols out, checking them and rubbing off the ash on them. "I still am a murderer... Nothing's changed." She shoved them away and blinked up at her new friend. "Ariana, right?"

 

"Your not a murderer...." trailed Ariana. She head her hands over her ears when she heard her friend say that. "Your not! You had a reason to fight.... We all did...."

 

Rested, Caeli got back up to his feet. He decided to look around and see what there was to do.

 

Ulrich simply stared at Jo and shrugged. "The world's harsh. There's only so much you can do before things fall apart in front of you," he told her. Ulrich sat back and closed his eyes. He didn't need to sleep, or to rest. He barely expended much of his own magical abilities. By now, the roots and spikes he conjured on the commander and his wounded men had already returned to the earth, freeing them. Ulrich didn't want to be known for his own abilities. In fact, he didn't even want to exist. Thus was why he lied. Jellal's pride would be unharmed, even as he was unconscious. Ulrich had seen wizards in the past lose control and go on a magical rampage, then waking up afterwards to not remember a thing. It wasn't strange and it was believable. He sighed. "If you don't want to be something..." he murmured, more so to himself than to anyone in particular. "Then be what you want."