The 14th Key ~ Chapter 1

thank you! :D

 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

great great great great job

It was amazing!!!!!!!!!

Poor Xed

what if Xed just becomes a nobody/heartless and doesn't stay in human form?

*is scared*

Great Job though!

*hopes for more*

FIRST POSTNESS!

 

lol thanks!

:D you'll find out soon enough...

 

Ahhhhh!!! Demyx or Axel should jump in between Xed and Roxas and get stabbed instead Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! *refreshes page over and over*

 

OMG i like nearly cried (thats just the kind of person i am....) I feel bad for him, I mean thats a hard thing to choose................

 

WHOAMG WOW

WHY THE CLIFFHANGER? THIS IS SO AMAZING!

The suspense! I'm trembleing!

I had to stop reading for a minute after that and take a breath! xD


Oh yeah, i think you made a mistake:

Didn't you mean, "he shouted back"?

 

noooo your the best at cliffhangers dammit haha, ooo maybe he could do it to himself, feeling to guilty to do it to her, or he should do it, ooooo dilemmas dilemmas, im sure whatever you pick it will be great

 

lol, who knows... thanks! the next chapter will be out later today

(right now i got Saix my camera to work, and now i'm uploading the keyblade pics :D)

i almost cried too! that is really hard to choose!!!

yes, i made a mistake :D Thanks for pointing it out! *goes to edit*

And thanks for reading! :D I hate cliffhangers myself, but i love to torture my readers with them :)

thank you! :D You'll have to wait and see....

*evil smile*

 

NOOO!!! I hate cliffhangers..... Aww i hope Roxas doesn't do it....He could do it to Mansex instead....I mean, who would give a damn if anything happened to him? Anyways, keep it up!!



PS: My team won the game!! WE ARE THE CHAMPIONS!!! :D :D :D

 

That was AWESOME!
I love cliffhangers! That was so cool!
DIE XED! DIE! XD
Sorry, I'm always on the evil side.

 

lol yeah really! thanks!

WOOTTTT!!!!! *starts playing 'we are the chamipons' song*

That's awesome! Congrats! :D

lol thanks!

thats ok, i'm on the evil side alot too :)

i wonder if he'll go through with it...

 

BS: I FINALLY READ IT! MWAHAHAHAHA... hahaha... *falls over from exhaustion of trying to be able to read the story and then reading it*

Axel: Uh... *pokes her* She says that she likes the story and that she'll read the other chapters as soon as she can. And she really liked it when they were all expecting some big brawny guy and they get a girl. Of course, she was half-expecting something like that to happen, but she found it hilarious.

 

Thanks!! It was really cool to win, after such a hard game. We won 4-3 with the last goal scored in the last 5 minutes of the game..

 

Trust me, so am I!!! *drools over Axel*

 

lol. ok, tell her i said thanks! :D

oh, and one more thing....

*huggles Axel*

I LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!

 

NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I've got a huge lump in the back of my throat!!!! Omg, omg, omg!!!!!!! Roxas can't do it!!! Stupid Mansex!!!!!!

Okay, okay, enough with the ranting. Whatever you choose, I'll still read it. :D

 

sweet! *high fives*

lol i'm glad you like the story! the new chapter will be out tonight :D

 

*high fives back*

 

lol *drools with you*

Axel: This is...uncomfortable....*backs away from drooling fangirls*

 

:D

*keeps working on ch 12*