That Tragic Day

I'm filled with depression
my life has fallen apart
Nobody's there
when I really need someone
to show me the way

Ever since that fateful day
when you woke up one morning
it was a tragic event
and I couldn't help but cry

you were quickly rushed to the hospital
where they would take good care of you
but i had a bad feeling
that today something tragic would happen

and before i knew what was going on
doctors rushed into your room
they gently took me out in the hall way
and told me you'd be fine

but i knew better and i hugged my bear tight
waiting to see what had happened
i felt a warm tear run down my cheek
and my dad embraced me tightly

that night i cried myself to sleep
because i knew what had happened
even though they refused to tell
My mother had died
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My friend's mother had to go to the hospital this morning and this poem suddenly popped into my head...

 

Yup i hope her mom is ok and I really like the poem is this free verse?

 

i hope her mom is okay as well...

and everything i write is free verse...

 

Dude i feel so sad for no reason.I'm depressed for some reason T-T

 

me, too... T-T

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=1220259#post1220259

just look at this poem i wrote... it is about what it would feel like if somebody said they loved you... but it was all a lie and they stab you in the back... T-T that definately isn't like me at all...

 

Thta happend to my sis but she didn't care.

 

Some parts looks like I wrote them when I was depressed, but very good I should admit.

 

Thanks! :) and was? does that mean that you're happy now? :)

 

A little happy, most of me is angered now, but I am not sad.

 

well that is good to hear.. i mean... about you being at least a little happy... :) I hope your anger melts away soon... :P

 

Wow...that's good...although you forgot to capitalize the 'I,' but otherwise...awesoem job. I'm really sorry that happened, but everything will be okay, honey...*hugs* I'm there for you. :)

 

A very good poem that shall be remembered.

 

nymph keeps picking up errors hehe

i hope your friends mum is okay

 

:sweatdrop: Er, sorry if it's bothering you DestinyStar, only trying to help...*hugs*

 

*hugs* it doesn't bug me... it helps... :P

I hope she's okay too... the only mom i've ever seen play Zelda... O_O I should find out if she's okay today...

 

Aww! That really sucks. I hope you feel better soon. The poem was good, but very depressing. Hopefully your next one will be about something happier.
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her mom is fine... :P

but i'm sorry to say that i wrote another depressing poem in Reading class today... we were having a spelling bee and i got out on the first word... >.< so i was bored... I'm sick of writing depressing stuff but... I can't seem to stop...

 

Aww..that's bad. Are you gonna post it? You make good poems, I'd like to see it. Sorry to hear things aren't looking up for you. Maybe you should read your Be Happy poem again, even though this one is great, the Be Happy one is probably more cheery-uppy.
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I am going through a stage where i get mood swings... >.< these poems make me feel better... and I know that people enjoy them...

 

Okay, I understand. When you're really good at something it probably does make you feel better to do it. We should probably not stray too off topic though and take personal things to PM, becuase we don't want to wind up having this thread closed.
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