Teenaged love

Hmm... Could you edit the form just a bit. Like the vampire teeth. He can have some kind of sharp and pointy teeth but not vampire. And also how could he have teeth when he was born? And maybe add some stuff to the "what kind of people likes to date"

Bic: "I see..." he muttered.
"You play the keyboard pretty well, but don't press so hard. The sound would be clearer if you just press gently. Like this" he said and placed his fingers on the keyboard.
"May I?" he asked.

Katie chose herself just a bottle of juice. She took the skittles for Dan and a bottle of Mountain Dew and a packet of fruit pastilles for Laila.
"You ready soon?" she asked Zack.

 

Okay, so edit the form a bit and post it here again.

 

Username:Rhoppergaurd
Name: Draco
Age:16
Personality:Fun but always worried.
Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/a...9/AnimeGuy.gif
What kind of people likes to date:Looks and Personalitywise. Also someone who is fun, happy and cool.
Bio:He has a secret. He actually has Pointy teeth but he can't suck blood or anything like that. He's just afraid that someone might think he is a Vampire.
History:His mom called him Draco because she loved vampires.
Other:

 

'Kay this is fine.

 

A Teenager walked past them. ''Im glad schools over!'' He said.

 

Just informing you ,if you didn't notice it earlier, that it's summer vacation.

 

OC: Oh...I'll change it.

 

The first three words of this RP is "It's summer vacation"...

 

"Yeah, here I'll pay." he said as he took out $10.

"Go ahead, I try not to press hard, but when your doing songs like that, it's almost like you have the URGE too." Laila smiled.

 

"I know the feeling. I needed to practice hard to learn to press the keys gently."
Then he closed his eyes and breathed heavily. As he opened his eyes he started playing a small opening to the song and continued it with the actual song. He quietly sang the song while playing the piano.

"'Kay then." Katie said. When they had payed for everything they started walking towards the park. Katie heard some music coming from there but Laila or Dan wasn't playing it.
"Who's that?" she asked before she saw that it had been the guy who was listening to them play.

When Roy finished playing he breathed heavily again.
"Sorry. I wasn't supposed to play the whole song... But it seems like the rest of your band is coming. I'll just let you play without me bothering you."

 

"N- n- no! Stay, it's fine." Laila said, as she let out a sweet smile.

"I don't know, but he plays good."

 

"Hm, fine." Roy said and gave out a grin.

Katie walked to them. She threw the skittles to Dan and gave Laila her mountain dew and fruit pastilles. She looked at Roy shyly and turned a bit away.

Roy saw Katie's shyness.
"I'm Roy." he said to them all.

 

"Hi Roy..." Laila said, forgetting that she'd just met him, she completely zoned out "... Oh wait ... Ummm ... This is Roy, he liked our band and is awesome at playing keyboard."

"Hey man." Zack said as he smiled.

 

''Hmph.'' Draco grunted.

 

"Hello." Roy said and shook Zack's hand.

 

Someone phoned Draco. On the phone, you heard, ''Did you find them?'' Then Draco said, ''I think this is the place.''

 

"So, would you like to join our band?" Zack asked, "You could also do keyboard, but if anyone else wants to join, they're going to have to play drums."

 

Draco flipped his phone down. He then heard the mention of drums...he loved drums. He went up to the stranger and said, ''Did you say drums?''

 

"Ummm yeah why?"