A vision like a distorted dream Is what I know to be my shifting life As if it were someone's humorous scheme That i must constantly walk past this strife I feel like all I know is to sleep Because I know I've had what's to take My only fear is if this dream's too deep That I'll have no choice but to wake Perhaps I have far too old of a head To say that I should be wise to know more But alas I won't stop walking ahead Until the day I knock on heaven's door Questions and/or opinions si vous plait.
Hmm... waune, une partie du 'besoin du I profité, et 'rêve 'est accidentellement mal épelé, mais autrement, le grand travail :) Maintenant si je peux seulement vous convaincre de traîner l'histoire de votre KH-vids ici... badinant juste. Vous pas devez si vous ne voulez pas à. XD lol Okay, in English: Hmm...well, some of the 'I's need to capitalized, and 'dream' is accidentally misspelled, but otherwise, great job. :) Now if I can only convince you to drag your KH-vids' story here...just kidding. You don't have to if you don't want to. XD
XD Cool. Anyway, I've lost ideas for my story lately, but I'm still trying to continue it. I just need some good ol' fashioned rocket-sauce (inspiration)
