Here is an idea I came up with. When I was in the shower. Actually that's where I do a lot of my thinking. Yes, that was unnesesary imformation. Well, this is about a new Organization of the old members. They are, just a bit, different. They are not Axel, Roxas, Xemnas, etc. They are Alex, Sora and Ansem, etc. The reason will be revealed so read on! Xaale is an unknown teen to almost everyone on Destiny Islands. Probably no one knows she is even there. She is small, skinny and has long golden hair that twists and shines in the twinkling sun that is often not seen in her part of the woods. By this, it literaly means woods. Xaale is an unknown teen to almost everyone on Destiny Islands. Probably no one knows she is even there. She is small, skinny and has long golden hair that twists and shines in the twinkling sun that is often not seen in her part of the woods. By this, it literally means woods. In the center of Destiny Islands, past all of the flourishing tropical trees lies a small, dense forest with one pure lake. In the middle of the lake lies a circular, grassy island with a wooden house standing in a lonely position. This is where Xaale lives, away from the world. Xaale is unlike most humans in another way, too. She is a nobody and has no heart to speak of. She controls the power of Nature and Healing without even having to say a word. Many years before she settled in this small wooden lodge, Xaale was helping the Organization XIII. Although she was never a member, she would take part in any mission they asked of her. That was years ago, though, and it had been through those years that she hadn’t heard a word from them. Stretching her bony arms, Xaale padded outside without her sandals on. The soft grass tickled the sole of her foot as she took her first step outside in the last few days. She had been sitting at a desk on the upper floor, researching a place dreaded by all nobodies. The Void was this place, where nobodies enter and never leave. They start their journey and never finish. This is where they go when they disappear, for they cannot die. They vanish to the Void. In these long, humid days Xaale suffered through, she found a way to enter the Void. She met many faceless people, who called in voices unknown. Stumbling through the darkness, Xaale bumped into one spirit. Somehow, the words were legible enough to recognize as Demyx’s. Grabbing his arm, Xaale floated out of the Void and landed in a mass onto the floor of her room. Looking up and brushing the hair out of her eyes, she saw Demyx looking back into hers. Eleven more times this trip was made. All she needed to do was to find Sora. There Xaale could merge Roxas from inside of him, and the Organization would rise again. The plan seemed like a fantasy to her, but it would come true. It had not backfired yet, she reminded herself. This was only the prologue. Wait until the second chapter when: Roxas emerges from Sora Xaale becomes the Organization XIII's fourteenth member Sora puts his hand to his heat and....
Prologue sounds interesting, only problem is i wouldn't have gone with the lime green font cause it kinda hurts the eyes against this white background.
Oh noes...I liek meh green font. Ah well, I'll change it. Thanks! DARK green font es teh second best, am ah rights? Yeah, I'm in a good mood right now. Tat's why ima talken liek this.
Uh...I can't tell if that comment is positive or negative. Thanks for your comments, everyone! Here is the next chapter: Sora grinned as Kairi stumbled and fell into the dancing orange ocean. The sunset glittered like a giant gem in the sky, casting a docile light over the competitions the trio were having. Kairi and Riku had been racing across the stretch of untamed sands that were baren from trees and grass alike. Kairi had fallen, her left shoe spinning through the air and landing with a sploosh in the water. “Oh no, now look what you did!†Kairi pouted at Riku, who embarrasedly grinned back. It had been five months since the departing of the World That Never Was, and Riku finally seemed more like himself again. His silver hair was still long and untamed, but Sora reminded himself that his hair hadn’t changed either. A voice broke the chatter between the teens that made Sora jump from the sand. It sounded soothing and peaceful, but when he turned around he saw the unmistakable black cloak. He stretched out his bare arm and bidded to the keyblade. In a dazzling light it appeared in his hand as if it had been expecting this. “You are from the Organization XIII,†Sora growled. By now, Riku and Kairi had there keyblades drawn and ready for battle. The thin figure lifted the menacing hood and they were greeted by a smiling teen. “You are wrong,†she smiled to Sora. Then embracing Riku and Kairi, she said, “I am Xaale. I have buisness to do with Sora. I am not from the Organization XIII. I just wear the cloak that represents them.†Taking him by the arm, Xaale disapearred with Sora into a cloud of swirling darkness. Kairi ran over to the spot were they had materialized away before turning back to Riku. His eyebrows were raised in a surprised manner as he stated, “Uh…should we go after her?†Sora openned his eyes to see a shabby room that seemed to be a kitchen. Standing up, he saw the teen at the counter preparing a dish. Turning around before Sora could make a getaway, she said something in what seemed to be a second language. “Uradv, hphujh iurp Vrud,†she chanted twice in a calm tone. A fluttering feeling started to swell up inside Sora before he passed out on the floor. Standing next to him, was a young teenager with spiky blonde hair. It was Roxas. A day later, Xaale stepped out of Castle Oblivion after returning Sora to the shoreline of Destiny Islands. She had just been dubbed as the fourteenth member of the Organization XIII. It had been a successful time for her, but that was before what everyone discovered. Donald Duck squaked at Sora, “You haven’t been yourself lately.†Sora nodded sullenly and gazed up to the bird. Goofy looked up and asked, “Be sincere Sora. Are you happy to be back, hyuk?†Sora replied back in a surprised tone, “Of course! Why wouldn’t I? I just have felt empty. I used to feel Roxas inside of me for a while. I shared his thoughts and could communicate with him.†He stopped to put his hand on his heart. “I haven’t heard from him lately, that’s-“ Sora stopped suddenly as his eyes grew wide. Taking his hand off his heart, he placed his thumb on the side of his neck. Goofy started to tilt his head quizzically as Sora placed his thumb on his wrist. “I, I don’t have a pulse!†Donald looked at Goofy nervously as he offered to test for Sora. He tried for a pulse but the Head Knight didn’t find one. Sora stammered, “What happened to my heart?†Coming next chapter: Xemnas calls the Organization in panic. Sora must find Castle Oblivion once again. Sora will meet someone he does not remember, and when he is told he gets a sudden fear.
The first thing Roxas felt as he emerged from Sora was that he was a new person. A rush of happiness and emotion he had not felt in a long time swept over him, giving him a sense of actually being somebody, instead of a Nobody. It felt weird when he saw the young teen standing over him and Sora, who was knocked out. Roxas stood and smiled before teleporting in a rush of shadows. A few days later, Roxas recieved a message from his Superior, Xemnas. He had not remembered hearing this tone of voice before from the leader of the Organization XIII. He teleported to Castle Oblivion, the desired meeting place of Xemnas's call. Sitting on the highest chair in the snow-white chamber, Xemnas spoke first. "Members of the Organization, I have called for an urgent note. It has been five days since Xaale, the Natural Dragoon, had returned us from the Void that we Nobodies are sent to. I have noticed something different about myself then before. If any of you have, too, then please answer me now." Roxas paused, looking around. The majority of the Organization were, too, and once or twice the hand of Xigbar went up. Xemnas turned his attention to the Freeshooter the third time the hand was raised and asked how he felt. "Well Superior, I don't really now how'ta put it. I seem so happy now and I am not sure why. Maybe the Void left some 'orrible impression on me, and I probably felt like a dud then." He lifted his scared face to see the Superior pointing to him. "Feel your chest, Number II. Where your heart should be." The statement suprised the members that sat on the towering seats. Xigbar's gloved hand flashed to his heart and for a moment it laid there. His good eye grew wide as he shouted, "My chest has a pulse. Dudes, I think I hav'a heart!" "Indeed you do, Xigbar. And we all do. You can check if you like while I summon Xaale here. A moment of silence started as the twelve people put their hands on their hearts. Roxas started to realize that this was why he felt so much emotion. Demyx broke the silence. "I never felt this way. I really thought before that we had a heart. It seemed so logical since we were able to show some emotion." The Savage Nymph spoke back in an angry tone to the young member of the Organization. "Isn't it obvious, Mullet Boy, that we had no hearts before? Didn't you ever try checking for a pulse?" Demyx took down his hood to glare into Larexene's eyes. "Maybe I did check for a beat. In fact, I have done it so many times that I can't even count. What I meant was that deep down we could have had a heart." Axel, who had been listening to the fight the whole time, broke in. "Hey Dem Dem, dontcha remember that you were saying that to trick Sora? Obviously it didn't work, 'cause the duck even knew you were lying." Demyx was taken aback at the comment and started to whine, "Hey, I wasn't trying to trick him! I really meant what I said." Axel grinned, his green eyes flashing. "Even if you did, know one cares. Got it memorized?" Xemnas spread his arms wide and shouted, "STOP! All this arguement! We are what we have always wanted to be! Don't you get it? But I am still nervous. What happened to our somebodies hearts? Xaale can answer that." Everyone turned to look at Xaale, who they didn't notice her appearance with all of the yelling. She smiled up at them nervously and before getting down to buisness. "All of you have hearts now, except for me. What happened when I rescued you was that you switched hearts with your somebody. I found out that Sora's heart is missing just yesterday." Xaldin removed his hood before adding, "I've met my "Somebody" before. If I have Dilan's heart, then am I Dilan or am I Xaldin?" His tattooed face was grim. "No, you are yourself. Somewhere in the worlds, Dilan has no heart. I bet he is just as puzzeled as you were. But there is something serious. We have what we were looking for. We have hearts, so we don't need an Organization anymore. They will definetly rise into one, and that may be a danger. They will not be a threat to the Heartless, as we now are. They will be able to command Nobody legions." Everyone nodded in agreement. After a few short discussions the once Organization dismissed, planning on staying in the Castle Oblivion for now. Little did they know they would be having company. The next day, Sora stood next to Riku, Donald, Goofy and Kairi. They stood with weapons drawn in front of a shining door that appeared from the Keyblade. Sora turned to them and spoke quietly, "Riku, you must watch over Kairi. I must go to Castle Oblivion. I'm sure Roxas is there. I will be back soon, I promise." Kairi waved in unison to Riku as Sora and his two friends entered the portal. They emerged in front of a golden castle on the edge of a crumbling cliff that hung over absolute nothingness. Towers and turrets of a light blue color jutted out randomly in several places. This was Castle Oblivion. As the trio drew nearer, Donald spotted a young girl with a white dress and blonde hair that was neck length. Her back was turned at first, but she turned around to see the trio. A gasp escaped her mouth as she shouted, "Sora! You found me! Just like in the World That Never Was when I left to my Somebody. I knew you wouldn't forget Castle Oblivion." Sora paused for a second before stating, "Wait, that's not right. How did I know about CAstle Oblivion? I don't think I've been here before." Goofy nodded. "Gawsh, do you think it's a coincidence?" Namine smiled, a tear in her eye. "No, I sent him a memory. A memory of mine. He does not remember this place or his time in here...nor the people you met. I am Namine, and you met me twice. Once here, and once again in yoour last journey, but then I merged with Kairi. You forgot me, except for the links burried deep in your heart. Search for them, Sora! I beg you!" Sora nodded with a determined glint in his eye. He did not remember this girl, but he trusted her. He closed his eyes and summoned his memory. He thought of all the things he could, but nothing about her showed up. Nothing until he remembered Kairi. Conversations with this girl flashed through his mind. Laughter, sorrow, fear, determination, and a promise. "Namine!" Sora blurted out. Goofy cocked his head and Donald tapped his foot. Namine smiled, and said, "You remember me. I called you here. I am so happy. You remember anyone you saw here?" Sora shook his head. "Only you. No one else." He pondered a moment before saying fearfully, "Wait, I forgot to tell you: I don't have a heart. Did you know why?" Namine nodded. "Yes, I do. You switched hearts with Roxas when he emerged from you." Sora still had fear in his tone as he said, "Wait, what about Kairi! She might not have a heart since you are her Nobody! Tell me, is she okay?" Namine started to answer, but a swirl of darkness enveloped her as she disapeared into thin air. "NO!!!" Sora shouted to the spot where the young girl was a second ago. Next chapter: Sora enters Castle Oblivion. Sora meets a man who claims to have once foughten him. A group of people form together, thriteen who have lost their hearts. Okay, phew. Long chapter. I hope you like it! Now I have to research to Orgy's Somebody names. They make appearances verrry soon. Not all names are in the next chapter so, yeah. :silence:
Sure. Since you like to glomp Riku so much, I'll try to put him in the next chapter. :glomp: :bounce: :bangbang: Right now I have writers block I'll think of a chapter tomorrow. I'll just keep banging my head against this wall...:bangbang: :p
Here it is: Ansem walked casually through the dark streets of an unknown world. He turned a corner and bumped into a towering figure that blocked the light that came from the moon. This was the only light on this world, day and night. How impossing it seems. Ansem looked up to see a man that looked quite like him. He had golden eyes and white hair that glowed even in the gloom. He grabbed Ansem by the scruff of his neck and the master of darkness whimpered in pain. "You have given me your heart, Ansem. I am your nobody, but now you are mine. I have come to warn you to never set foot in Castle Oblivion. If you are found there with the other people who have now transformed into Nobodies then I shall crush you with all my power." Ansem winked up at the man. "Xemnas. I should have known. I have never met you before, have I? Well, of course I know about you. I am smart that way. I am also smart enough to listen to your warning." Then man disapeared without a word to Ansem. Ansem fell to the ground, and while wiping his cloak he smirked, "That does not mean I have to listen to it, though." Braig walked through the streets of Traverse Town. He was here on a mission to destroy a large heartless. It seemed that the Guardian Armor so long ago destroyed by Sora was back, and Braig's friend Squall Leonhart asked him to take the armor out. Turning a corner, a gust of black winds swept over him. Closing his eyes, he put a hand over his eyes as the winds thrashed against his scared face. His mane of black abd white hair flowing, Braig was teleported in front of a golden castle. He stared in front of him, unsure of what to do. Dilan walked through the green meadows that he had seen in his most recent dream. A man came to him, telling him to never come through these meadows or follow the path. Dilan kept going until he saw two men stumbling up the path to greet him. "I am Ansem, and this is Braig." The white haired man grinned, an evil aurora around his features. Dilan nodded and readied to follow them, but they only stood where they were. "What are we waiting for?" Dilan tilted his head, his black hair falling to his shoulders. Ansem grin grew wider. Even walked through the cold outskirts of Halloween Town. He was here to see a scientist he heard of, so he could save his wife from death with a special potion. A noise sounded behind him, causing Even to turn around. He saw a figure before he was knocked out. Hours passed by in this darkness, and when he finally awoke he was at an intersection of paths. Only a boy stood here, no older then sixteen. He turned around and beckoned Even to follow. Okay, I lied. I only have five of them. I still need Lexeuas, Zexion, Saix Axel, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia and Larexene. I would like it if someone would help me find the Somebody names of five, six, tem and eleven. I have the others. Oh, and sorry that Riku wasn't in it.
This story is really good! I like how you described the characters'actions. Here's some somebody's names: No.5 Lexaeus - Aeleus (Eleus - North American Version ) No.6 Zexion - Ienzo
its ok but riku ROX DA HOUSE!! *glomps* larxene is Elanore axel is Ale (he seems to have a fetish for names that are inatimate objects XD) zexion is Ienzo Demyx is either Myde or Edym (i cant remember lolz) that all i remember lolz
Larexene is Arelene, for me. Huh, I never thought of Elenar. Xemnas: Mansex *cough* I mean Ansem! Xigbar: Braig Xaldin: Dilan Vexen: Even Lexaeus: Eleus Zexion: Ienzo Saix: Sai Axel: Alex, Lea or Ale Demyx: Myde Luxord: ? Marluxia: ??????????????????????? 0.o Larexene: Arlene Roxas: Indiana Jones, no wai! Nah, Sora. Never knew, did you?
