Working on smudging+ptool again. ShiT, it looks really dark now that I posted it... Damn EDIT: A little lighter, but still really dark when posted.
I understand originality and artistic affects, You've never had problems with inventive new things. But some things just look bad. Try and get a better border. I also have a slight issue with depth, maybe taking away toe border and revealing the lighter spot ont he right will add tot he depth a bit.