Surpassers of Castle Oblivion

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  1. Envious623 Twilight Town Denizen

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    [[Sorry, SoranRikunKairi, I'm not sure when you left.]]

    Saix exited the dark corridors, appearing behind Xemnas as he watched the fight. He lingered a few feet behind Xemnas, and paused for a moment before saying, "Xemnas... I mean no disrespect, but do you truly intend to allow Marluxia control of this castle again? He has already proved his disloyalty." Saix frowned, unsure of how to phrase what he was saying without disrespecting Xemnas, "I would never question your decisions, of course. I simply..." Saix trailed off, then shook his head, "Forgive me for questioning your decision, Superior. I'm sure there are a multitude of reasons." Saix retrieved Marluxia's card from his pocket, "I have recovered the card Marluxia made if you might want it in any way." He held the card out silently.

    [[...Am I making Saix into too much of a suck-up? I think I've done good so far, but this post might be a bit full of it. xD I just figured Xemnas would get a bit pissed if Saix openly questioned his decisions.]]​
     
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    OOC: SoraNRikuNKairi, Riku escaped from Hollow Bastion and Roxas is left dumbfounded. Sora went through Traverse Town and left now facing Luxord. Also that was fine, I can actually Imagine Saix saying that xD

    BIC:

    Xemnas took the card and grinned at Saix. "If he is proven disloyal, The same will happen. The Keyblade Master will destroy him, If not, I will." Xemnas replied not thinking of the disrespect. "Your choice is yours. You don't have to be a servant. Just remember what could happen." He advised. He could've meant that if Saix screwed up, He would not be held responsible. He wouldn't reply to the card as he kept watching Luxord fight.
     
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    OOC - Thx for the recap everyone..!

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    [OOC: I have no idea what to say. Leave Namine to ponder.]​
     
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    Marluxia decided to speed up Xemnas' journey a bit. Through the sort of hive mind that Nobodies rarely used, he issued an announcement.
    "It seems that Xemnas won't take me up on my offer. Care to offer a bit of encouragement, my fellow Nobodies?"
    Across the universe, hundreds of billions of lesser Nobodies chanted the same thing to Xemnas, over and over.
    "Do it! Do it! Do it!"
    Marluxia chuckled.
    "If Xemnas won't play my game now, his entire nobody army will inevitably mutiny."
    "You hear that Xemnas? They also think it will be beneficial. They'll begin to doubt you if you refuse. You wouldn't want that, now would you?
     
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    Repliku waited several moments before sighing. "Fine, I can see you aren't speaking to me. Whatever." He bit out in annoyance. Sending a last glare at Namine, he left through a dark portal.

    Saix nodded, "I understand, Xemnas. I shall wait for now." He paused, glancing down at the fight between Luxord and Sora. "However, what if number X was to fail, yet not be erased? Such a failure should not be tolerated, should it?" He glanced to the side at Xemnas, an impassive expression on his face.

    Repliku stepped out from the dark portal, glancing around. He was next to the entrance of the memory room on the floor above Hollow Bastion's memory room. The talk with Namine hadn't gone so well, so he might as well mess with his original, right? A nasty smirk formed on the Repliku's face. It should be any minute now.

    [[All you specified was Riku running out of Hollow Bastion, and not him getting to the floor. If I didn't make it clear, Repliku isn't directly outside the exit of Hollow Bastion. He's waiting for Riku next to the door where you'd use the card to pick a world.]] ​
     
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    Sora skidded back, recovering just in time to shoot a burst of ice at Luxord. "Blizzard!" He shouted. I don't remember him being that fast!
     
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    Marluxia portalled in behind Luxord and used his upgraded weapons to knock him down, then jumped into the air and did a small backflip over Luxord's head, pushing off of it to land neatly at Sora's side.
    He leaned over to whisper in Sora's ear, "Do you want to beat Luxord? Then do what I say and do it quickly before he catches on."

    OOC: Are we allowed to make characters that we don't control do anything? Not something big like getting beaten by another character, just something small like making Roxas say, "Wait!" after someone leaves. Is that okay?
     
  9. Zeonark Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: I have no idea what you mean. You mean a random character for one use and then he/she leaves to never be seen again?

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    Xemnas couldn't reply to Saix. He was annoyed by Marluxia entirely. Thinking he had change because Sora had gave him his punishment for disloyalty. He ripped the card and sent a soundwave to the lesser nobodies, quickly hushing them and making their thoughts silent to even themselves. "You're lesser nobodies. Don't make it where YOU will be destroyed." Xemnas commanded through thought. "Take care of Marluxia." Xemnas ordered Saix disappearing.

    Riku ran out the door and the second he ran inside the castle room, the minute he sensed Repliku. He started running before being smashed in the arm by a Strike Raid from Oblivion. "Where do you think you're going?" Roxas asked before he struck down by Xemnas himself. "He's going to face his Replica." He said, Riku didn't move for a second as Roxas slowly got up. "Replica? He has a r-" Xemnas moved his hand in front of Roxas' face, summoning a pack of cards. "You shall not interfere with their battle." Ending it with a teleportation to the Upper Floor Meeting room.
     
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    [[There's a lot going on. T.T Oh my. xD ]]

    Saix growled in annoyance, summoning his claymore as he used a dark portal to appear behind Marluxia. "How dare you directly defy the Superior?!" Without waiting for Marluxia to respond, using what he felt to be anger, he grabbed Marluxia and threw him into the dark portal, momentarily closing it. He sighed slightly, smoothed his robes down, and spoke to Sora. "Sora. It has been a while since our last meeting. I am... busy at the moment, but I am sure we may be re-acquainted later." He snapped his fingers, summoning several Berserkers to help Luxord. "Do not fail in your mission, X. You know what will happen." With that, he disappeared into a dark portal as quickly as he had come.

    Repliku smirked as he heard footsteps on the stairs, and pushed himself off from where he was leaning. He would wait, and see what Riku had to say to him. A chuckle escaped from his throat as Soul Eater appeared in his hand.

    Saix's calm face turned into a snarl as he faced Marluxia, his claymore clenched in his hand. "Marluxia. You have betrayed the Organization for the second time. You know the price of betrayal well, do you not?"

    [[Entity, there are three berserkers currently. Do what you will with them, I'm giving you permission to control them.

    Edit: Oh, not Entity. You changed your username. Crescent Angel? I like it. Sorry, got distracted. xD Anyway, the berserkers are yours.]]​
     
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    OOC: I mean like this.
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    Xion looked at Roxas.
    "Goodbye."
    She said, before disappearing into a dark portal.
    "No! Wait!" Roxas exclaimed.

    OOC: That's what I meant. Is that fine?

    BIC
    The lesser nobodies were furious.
    "You really think you can shut us up that easily?" they thought to Xemnas, "We aren't Heartless you know. We can act of our own will. Besides, we still outnumber you by over a hundred billion to ten. Even with your greater strength, we can still win by sheer numbers. If we have to, we'll align ourselves with the Keybladers get rid of you once and for all. A Nobody is nothing after all, and nothing is eternal. You said it yourself."
    With that, 13 pink cubes surrounded Xemnas.

    OOC: I think that anyone should be able to control the Lessers. At least those that they are allied with. For example, if they turned against Xemnas, Zeonark couldn't control them anymore unless one of the Lessers' allies allowed him to by giving him back control. What do you think?

    EDIT: Since it seems like no one will be posting in a while, I'll edit the next part in now.
    Just before the portal closed, Marluxia threw a Key Chain to Sora.
    "Use it! It will help you defeat Luxord! I give you my word on my honor as a Nobody that it will help you against him!"
    [Sora obtained Flowery Honor]
    Saix's calm face turned into a snarl as he faced Marluxia, his claymore clenched in his hand. "Marluxia. You have betrayed the Organization for the second time. You know the price of betrayal well, do you not?"
    "Betrayed the Organization? I think not. I only betrayed Xemnas for the better of the Organization," Marluxia retorted, "So you kiss up to Xemnas all you want, but if you want your heart back, if you want to see your sister again, you'll think twice about what Xemnas is doing for you, and what he's using you for."
     
  12. Envious623 Twilight Town Denizen

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    [[T.T You're seriously trying to get Marluxia murdered quickly and painfully, aren't you? Seriously. Berserkers aren't yours. Don't lap them in with lesser nobodies. Technically, all Marluxia has control of it Dusks, Creepers, and that one funky nobody he used in his final battle.

    Another thing. I'm sticking with canon, so can you edit your post? I don't want to RP about something that didn't happen. You can't just give another person's character long lost relatives and use that to your advantage.

    Sorry for kinda biting your head off. These things have kinda been bugging me.]]​
     
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    Sorry. I'll edit my post. I'll edit out Saix's sister coming into it, but can I at least keep the mention of her in? I just want one thing that doesn't really give me an advantage so much as help Marluxia with his plan.
    I wanted to have Marluxia point out one thing to each member that they must miss terribly from their old lives. Ansem for Xemnas, the sister for Saix, etc.
    And what I meant by controlling Lessers is that they still have their own wills, and so can turn away from their designated commanders of they wish.
    EDIT: Oh yeah, keep in mind that Marluxia upgraded his weapon. I'll make a sprite to show you what it is now.
     
  14. Envious623 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Ah, I understand. Sorry for getting mad at you. xD I get that nobodies have their own specific will, but I am controlling them, so they'll stay with him for now. I might have a couple join Marluxia for the heck of it. And sure, you can mention the whole family thing to Saix, though I can't guarantee he'll really be moved by it. ;) But yeah, that's fine with me, just mentioning it, that is.​
     
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    Okay, you should probably post Saix's response now. Here's a sprite of Upgraded Marluxia.
    [​IMG]
     
  16. Envious623 Twilight Town Denizen

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    [[Mmkay. The only problem is that I'm pretty sure Saix is supposed to be killing Marluxia right now. xD But I still want to keep things okay with Xemnas, so I'll stall for a bit till Zeo responds.]]

    Saix flinched slightly at the mention of a sister, then responded, "For the better of the Organization or not, it does not change the fact that you are a traitor." He lifted his claymore, twisting it as it changed into a more damaging weapon. Saix stepped closer to Marluxia, and narrowed his eyes, "Why should I risk my existence on a plan that I know not the details of?" Saix lowered his voice, "What proof do I have that you are not lying to me as Xemnas did at the Castle that Never Was? I... do not not take being used lightly." Saix stepped back, and stared at Marluxia calmly.

    [[Saix is talking about how Xemnas sent Saix after Sora when Xemnas knew he would be killed, and lying to him about how the Kingdom Hearts they made would help them get back their hearts. ]]​
     
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    OOC: As long as Xion reappears that's fine. Actually this betrayal thing is getting on my nerves ._. do as you will though. I just think the Lesser Nobodies would have the brains to of course not attack their Superior. Also don't take control of people's characters without permission xD I'll still be able to control Lesser nobodies since....well.....I made the RP >|

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    Xemnas snapped his fingers as the blocks disappeared. "Fine. You wish for me to go through with this? You all get a serve punishment, far worse than Axel gave to Vexen. Including Marluxia. After that you keep Quiet." Xemnas agreed with no choice, He wasn't prepared if the entire army of the Lesser nobodies completely betrayed him. He grabbed the pieces of the card and put it intact. Walking to a door and opening it with a card.

    Riku walked up to the room with Repliku. He wasn't even in the mood at all. "Did you want to fight?" He asked coldly. His mind was completely on Xemnas now. Roxas ran up but Riku blasted his own Dark Firaga, smashing Roxas in the face as he fell to the ground. "Stay Out." He demanded summoning Way To The Dawn.

    Axel was focusing on different things. So he had disappeared when no one noticed. He walked finally onto the Basment floor everyone entered through, only differently. It was a some sort of "Illusion" where Luxord and Sora were not at. It was the same floor but he couldn't notice. He rubbed his head a bit and looked up towards the stairs. "Where'd Roxas go?" He asked not aware of the situation.

    "He could be witnessing the fight between the real and the replica." A deep voice spoke as none other than Lexaeus. Number V, The Silent Hero. Appeared before the stairs.

    "You make this stupid illusion? Because it's pretty easy to sense Sora." Axel stated grinning. He in fact already knew Sora was facing Luxord.

    "How clever. I asked Zexion, before you all came and got the letter. To make this. Can you win agaisnt the organization? Traitor." Lexaeus pointed at Axel lifting his Tomahawk to do so.

    OOC2: For the love of god Envious. Your text is so small I can barely read it B|
    OOC3: Added a new rule. Got permission to control Axel. Sorry for the long post, and I said I was taking control of Lexaeus O-o
    OOC4: I lost the "Two Characters" Rule. Go figure.
     
  18. Envious623 Twilight Town Denizen

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    [[Sorry, I left the text on default. Lime green and small don't go well together. T.T Won't do it anymore. ...Though honestly, the betrayal thing is kind of annoying me too, Keyblade Spirit. Tone it down a bit? ]]

    Saix suddenly narrowed his eyes. "Offer refused. I'm not so foolish as to end with the same fate as you and Larxene." With that, he snapped his fingers, and several Berserkers appeared. "In the name of Organization XIII, I shall annihilate you." Several Berserkers lunged towards Marluxia, hammers swining wildly.

    Repliku raised an eyebrow at Riku's vehement expression. He raised an eyebrow, "Maybe not. Who was that?" he asked, referring to Roxas, who he had not heard speak before.

    [[Sorry for the short post, my sis is kicking me off. May edit.]]/INDENT]​




     
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    OOC: Kk :3

    "Someone like the people who made you. He isn't here with them though." Riku replied calming down a bit. "Nothing more than a shadow...Should I try to converse more to convice him to quit fighting? No point..." Riku thought shooting his hand with Way To The Dawn up into the air. "You ready? I'm not fighting for pity either replica." Riku stabbed the words into Repliku, well was trying too.

    Axel quickly summoned his Chakrams and stuck out his arms with them. "I see you're still the super saiyan rip off you used to be." Axel mocked smiling with the intent of destroying Lexaeus. "Silence. I shall kill you in the name of Organization XIII." He spoke repeating Saix's words to Marluxia as the room became a large circular arena. Small yet Tall spike pillars stood out on the sides with a Nobody Symbol on the floor as Axel twisted his Chakrams in a battle stance.
     
  20. Envious623 Twilight Town Denizen

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    [[Back. My sis decided she didn't want on the computer after all. T.T]]

    Repliku visibly flinched, but ignored the barb. Getting angry hadn't done him any favors in the past. "A nobody." Repliku looked contemplative, the expression out of place on his usually aggressive face. "But he's a traitor." He snorted. "Just like Marluxia, probably. Trying to take over the Organization or something?" Repliku responded, a sarcastic and mocking jab in his voice.​
     
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