Digital Art Sunset Horizons

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Anderson, Jun 25, 2007.

  1. Anderson (☞゚∀゚)☞ You've lost the game.

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    I worked on this for 2 hours trying to figure out the effects of Photoshop and all that stuff. I don't think it's all that good, but whatever.
     
  2. Eclipse Hollow Bastion Committee

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    first thing i noticed thats wrong is the text,no offence but the placement is horrible and can barely be readable.the effects are a good choice.like a zoom type effect.and you set it to a good direction.the red blood color next to the tag is kinda not good looking.use a couple cooling photo filters and a black-white gradient map and set them to good blending modes.
     
  3. Anderson (☞゚∀゚)☞ You've lost the game.

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    Hey, thanks for the comments, and I don't think I should have used the burn tool like that. Btw, can you tell me how to rotate text, if possible?
     
  4. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    The text is hard to read and I think the placement of the text needs a little work, too. And is too blured/smudged. I suggest you work on that. 7/10
     
  5. sand11 Moogle Assistant

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    i think htat it looks rly cool exept its hard to tell wats goin on in the sig.
     
  6. Sora-The keyblade wielder Destiny Islands Resident

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    I like it but its kinda hard to see sunset horizons
     
  7. Misty gimme kiss

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    First of all, erase some of the effects covering up the chaser. Leave some of them, but just lightly erase using a small abstract brush.

    The right side of the tag is a bit empty compared to the left; maybe add a clipping mask?

    IMO, the text is very good.

    Great job on this.
     
  8. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I like it but it's hard to tell..what is in it.