Sunrise

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  1. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Yeah, seriously... I jumped up in my chair, and hit my knees on my desk. Then, I fell outta my chair in excitement. I finally calm down a bit, and click on the thread title, and whuddah I c? No updates... *CrieS*
     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    LOL ITS CHAPTER THREE!!

    Yes, I finally got off my lazy a** to buckle down and write *sighness * Here ya go mis peties!

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    Namine threw her hands up in the air happily. IM DONE!!! She screamed excitedly in her mind. Nothing can run this day!! Xemnas walked by in a Speedo staring at her. He waved politely and dived into the crystal clear water. Namine’s eye started to twitch uncontrobably. Her eyes widened. Find your happy place, find your happy place, GOSH DANG IT XEMNAS GET OUT OF MY HAPPY PLACE!!! Ehhhhhhhh…I’m going to have nightmares tonight about this..She quickly grabbed her supplies and sketchbook and ran off to go have a little chat with Mrs. Kairi, she had to patch some important things up between the two of them…and she wanted to get away from Mansex back there in that bathing suit…

    She ran as quickly as the wind, her hair flapping like a blonde, wild beast. Her feet pounded against the sand, and the grains flew up behind her toes. She passed a small spring of water; delicately smoothing out ripples in the liquid. She came to a mouth in the cave in the side of the cliff, covered in vines. She pushed the green vines to the side and called in. “Kairi???” She took a deep breath in. ”K…A….I-??”

    “GO AWAY!!!”

    “Well… Ummm… IM COMING IN ANYWAYS!!” Namine screamed back. She tipped toed into the cave. Kairi was slumped over on the cold floor, sniffling in little tears. Her back was turned to the opening of the cave, so she didn’t see namine come in. Beside her lay a small rock, with little chalk marks on it. Namine’s gaze fell upon a wall in front of where Kairi was sitting. The blonde’s free hand gently flew up to cover her gapping mouth. In front of Kairi marked the drawing of Kairi and Sora, both eating one half of a poupu fruit, was scratched and scribbled out. It was barley even seeable through all of the scratch marks. To the right hand side of it lay a new drawing. Two girls facing opposite directions, one with long hair, the other with short. They were both clasping the same poupu fruit, but their hands weren’t touching.

    In the middle of them was a small, but visible, cracked heart.

    Namine’s girly smile had already turned into a petite frown, her eyes were narrowed and hurt. The bright blue turned to a soft hue, and a thin sheet of water covered her eyes. A small tear trickled down her cheek. Her stomach churned as if she had just been kneed in the stomach, and her face burned like fire. She collected her self and stomped in a huff, she could barley hear Kairi’s voice crying out to her as she left. Ohhhh… she is asking for it… Namine chuckled to herself. She sat herself down on the sand and set down her materials. She took out her drawing that she had finished only a few minutes and smirked. She cracked her neck and knucles. Castle Oblivion all over again baby...She twirled a pencil in-between her fingers and started to make a few small changes…

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    *Is sorry its so short*

    And the Xemnas part was added in just for you Kikame ^o^
     
  3. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    Mansex.....=_=


    good story XD
    Castle oblivion all over again.....sounds awsome XD
     
  4. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Thank you for that...I think XD

    Again I love your writing stlye.

    I thought you said she hated that Castle Oblivion thing? Could she really be that mad :O

    I think you mean Namine
     
  5. Rosey Chaser

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    Dude, she like is really really pissy right now >>

    Like REEEEEAAAALLLYYY pissy.

    Pissy Pissy.

    Pissy Piss Piss Pissy.

    Ya, shes that Pissed.

    And thank you ^o^
     
  6. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    *random quote of the day*
     
  7. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    What is it with you people and speedos?! Great ch. 3 by the way.
     
  8. W7F King's Apprentice

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    ROFLMFAO!!!

    OMG, you used Mansex. So not cool anymore. But, the speedo part was funneh. I expected it though, you talking about it so much earlier. Castle Oblivion all over agian, eh? Sounds fun fun fun!!!
     
  9. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    What? they makes the story funny X3

    *can't wait till next chapter*
     
  10. Thebazilly King's Apprentice

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    LOL, Xemnas randomness.

    Nice chappy. *Waits for next update.*
     
  11. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    OMG!!!


    J000 ISH AMAAZINNG!!


    *dies*

    That was a great cahpter.


    Maybe now you should change the title?

    Sunrise only fit when it was still a one shot.
     
  12. W7F King's Apprentice

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    'Tiz true.

    When's the next Chaptuh, anywayz?
     
  13. Rosey Chaser

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    Im not sure, I have been swamped with homework.

    Any suggestions on what I should change the tittle too?
     
  14. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Hmm... This is such an important predicament, I must stop doing my homework!! (I'm being totally truthful, I gotta procrastinate...) I'll go and meditate. By the time I'm done, I should have an answer to ur Q.
     
  15. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Ah, well that's alright. You should put homework first, can't have you failing now can we.

    Hmmm....how about make it "The Horrible Turth Of What Xemnas Wears When Swiming On Destiny Islands" :rofl: just kidding! Really I'm not to sure what you could call it.