Sunlight

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  1. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    You sit there on a sunny day
    Glancing bout you while you lay
    Out in the meadow
    Oh so green
    The bright sunlight shines
    Down, around
    The world about you
    Look up, there it is
    The sky in it's prime
    Oh so
    Blue, you
    Close your eyes as you meet the glare of the sun shine
    So sweet is the feel of the beams on your skin
    You lay there for hours, the sun making skies within your eyes
    More vivid
    More colorful
    More real
    You'll steal
    A few more hours under the only holy ghost
    Around
    Eyes still closed, the world within
    So green
    So blue
    So red
    So you
    You stare straight out at your eyelids
    The suns behind them casting shadows
    Acting out the plays
    Written by your minds eye
    In sleep
    In dreams
    In the mind that you wish you knew
    The real you who sleeps inside
    The only real light you'll ever find
    And you open your eyes
    And find a gray world



    I wrote this when I was sitting on my lawn a few days ago. Cnc if you want, I don't usually write that often.
     
  2. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I loved it's rythm to the words. Reading it in description (in my opinion) I can actually imagine all that:)
     
  3. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    Thanks, I didn't really notice the rhythm until you pointed it out.