Summer's Call

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Hakurei Reimu, Jul 11, 2007.

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  1. Great Story; PLEASE CONTINUE!

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  3. Decent; I don't mind.

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  1. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    *In celebration of the beginning of summer vacation for mostly everyone, I quickly came up with this story. I'm pretty much coming up with it as I go so it might not be the best. Anyways, on with the story...*

    The hot sun shimmers over the white, soft sads of Destiny Islands. Palms trees of all heights sways gently with the cool breeze in the air, shadowing over parts of the island. A ripe paopu fruit drops into the sands as a wave of water tucks over it, engulfing it into the vast blue sea. Within seconds, two teenagers rampages over the spot where the fruit lied as another wave washes to shore. The two dives straight into the crystal clear and refreshing waters hovering over the ocean sands.

    "WHOO MAN! This is cold!." Sora exclaims as he pierces the surface with his head.
    "Yeah, and that's so awesome!" Riku replies as he too takes his head out of the water.

    He immediately raise both hands sub-surfaced on the water and push forcefully, creating a giant splash. The water flew under the sun, reflecting glimmering sparkles in the air. The sparkles faded as it crashes onto Sora who braces himself for another. Eventually, Sora counters and water flew between the laughther of the two friends. After several minutes, the splashes subside and the two simply floated on the water surface, embracing the warm sun. Several minutes following, Riku notice their drift further into the sea.

    "Wana race?" He declared.
    "You asked for it!"

    Without replying, Sora dives and freestyles towards the shore, leaving Riku a few strokes behind him. Riku reacted quickly and begins the race. Before long, the two were close to shore as a giant wave boosted the two and washes them onto shore, back first. The wave returns into the ocean as the two laid motionless on the white sands, laughing with excitement and resumed bathing in the sun.

    * * *

    "Hey you guys! Up for some team blitzball?"

    A shadow resembling a human looms over the relaxed boys. They looked over and saw Tidus standing with Waaka holding a blitzball.

    Riku stood up and Sora sat up. He pounded his right hand into his left and cracked the knuckles on both.

    "Bring it!." He exclaims.
    "Awesome! Lets go!" Waaka added.
    "You guys start, I'm gona get us some drinks!"
    "Sweet, we'll meet you there." Riku continued.

    The three ran off to their personal blitzball court on the beach as Sora trailed toward Seaside Shack. He entered the small building to be welcomed by shelves of new Gatorade, Water, Juices of all kind, and many other drinks restocked the previous day for summer vacation. 4 bottles of fruit punch were held in his hands as he exits the shack.

    "Hey Sora."
    "Oh, hey Kairi. I thought you were helping with the party preparations with Selphie."
    "Yeah, but we're taking a 30 minute breather."
    "Cool."

    He walk towards the sand covered wooden bridge and sat on the edge. The wind blew across him, slowly drying his "Organization 13 design" trunks. Kairi took a seat beside him.

    "Riku's playing blitzball with Tidus and Waaka. I'm planning to join them soon."
    "Remember last summer Riku sprained his ankle. He couldn't play blitzball for 3 weeks."
    "Oh yeah, he was trying to pass the ball to Waaka. Games without him just aren't the same."

    He opened one of the bottles and drank a fifth of the content. At the same time, he grabbed a rock and threw it into the water.

    "I hope this summer's going to be better or as awesome as the previous years." Kairi said enthusiastically.
    "Yeah, we'd best be preparing ourselves for all the 'party till sunrise', surfing, blitzballing, brawling tourneys, swimming, skateboarding, and everything else...I get an adrenaline just naming it."
    "Remember how you got superglued to the toilet seat at our first party last year."
    Sora blushed as the memory came into his head. "Ah...Ahem...that was one of the worst 4 hours of my lifetime. Fine, what about the time Riku shaved 'kick me' on your hair and dyed it purple."
    "I hated him for that! I thought that was his meanest prank last summer."
    "Was it as mean as the time you dyed his skin green when he went in a swimming pool recklessly once? And it didn't wash off for 2 weeks."
    "Well..."
    Sora laughed while taking another sip. "Admit it. You know that was worst by a mile."
    "Alright fine...Hey! Do you remember the time when Tidus's pants got stuck on a branch when he was trying to get the blitzball off a tree."
    "Oh yeah! He fell and his pants ripped off and hung on the tree." He took another sip of fruit punch
    "Or how about the time Waaka farted for 10 seconds at the movies."
    Sora spat out the drink from his mouth, bursting into laughter. "That was a star moment last year! He locked himself in the bathroom stall for the rest of the movie!"
    "Yeah...it was lots of fun last year. It'll take us forever to talk about everything."

    She picked up a rock as well and threw it. It skipped ths surface 5 times as Kairi glanced at Sora smugly.

    Sora glance at the horizon. "Yeah, I look forward to this summer."
    "Yep..." She said with a smile.

    Kairi stood up and hopped in her boat.

    "I should go help out again. You shouldn't keep the other's waiting for long."
    "You're right. See ya later." Sora replied as he too stood up, waving.

    Kairi waves back and begins the row for the other island. Sora stares at the crystal blue ocean as if in trance. A smile came upon his face...

    "I have a good feeling...Let's get the party started!!"

    He ran off the bridge with the drinks in his hand and headed towards the game...

    (Have a great summer every1)
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    Nicely written and lots of detail. Great story. Are you adding more or is it a stand-alone story. You should post more of your work.