The colors are pretty poopy. D: It looks a lot like you were trying to work hard to bring out a color that did not really exist before you began the adjustments -- which is fine, but you have to have a clear idea of where you're going and you have to start early. I prefer to bring out the natural colors of the stock. Effects and such are quite pretty. The size is a bit strange but it's not bothersome. I'm not a fan of those vertical lines though -- they're kind of killing any attempt at flow. But otherwise, nice.
Thanks guys. :D I actually agree with Misty on my colours. I started out following the original colours to some extent, but then I tried adding in colours that weren't even there to begin with. That's what I had before my first applied image. XD