Digital Art >study for midterm

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Plums, Jan 23, 2012.

  1. Plums Wakanda Forever

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    And suddenly Korra tag!

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    oh god i will fail all the economics

    Comments and critique and stuff. :v
     
  2. Sumi suicidé

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    the big white blob on her boob looks a little funny and overal it seems a bit empty. nice colours though otherwise it's shaping up well. :3
     
  3. Shiki my waifu is better than yours, thanks

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    Looks like she's firebending to me. Nice.

    I also agree that it seems a tad bit empty. And the white blob on her tit does seem a little odd.
     
  4. Iskandar King of Conquerors

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    Looks more like firebending and waterbending at the same time when I look at it.

    This is really good, but you have so much space on the side of it, and that white on her chest is a little distracting. It kinda takes away the only thing you have on there
     
  5. Excasr The Forgotten XIII

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    Wow amazing one!

    It seems she is (I don't know who she is) using some sort of cool power, the colors blend very well together. She is in the right (>), it makes me imagine her power is really.... powerful LOL, because there is a lot in the lef (<).

    Her face is smiling and happy as well, what makes you feel her confidence. Very good.
     
  6. Saxima [screams geometrically]

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    Unf. Look at that sexy face.

    But it's kinda empty. But not really. Errrg, I can't decide if I like that emptiness next to her or not. How frustrating . . . But she looks good off to the side like that. There's a little . . . can you just . . . well . . . ahg, that thing on her boob. It's there. Neeeeeeeeewf, I'unno it no should be dere.

    I like it though. But that emptiness will either give me the most wonderful of dreams or the darkest of nightmares.
     
  7. Makaze Some kind of mercenary

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    I love the affects, but the render blends too well. You need to make it pop out more. It looks like you sharpened it, but the colours could use a little tweaking to make it a better focal point. Try playing around with curves if all else fails you. The thing on her breast could definitely stand to be less solid and bright, for starters.

    Lovely work as usual. The tag would look better without the render as it is. Maybe you could add some text? That is all I have for now.

    Makaze, signing out.
     
  8. Plums Wakanda Forever

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    Normally I would post a new thread, but since I worked off this .PSD...lol.

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    i like the left
    but hate the midde over her boob sTILL
    right is 0k, could use a bit brighter colors

    and yea.

    (Funny enough, I actually have finals coming up. Circumstantial simultaneity how I hate you).
     
  9. Ienzo ((̲̅ ̲̅(̲̅C̲̅r̲̅a̲̅y̲̅o̲̅l̲̲̅̅a̲̅( ̲̅̅((>

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    Very nice, I do like your ue of colours and the flow works well. I think you should have left some of her hands visible or something just to show some depth and so they don't just completely disappear.

    Have you done any saturation editing on this signature? Her shoulder just looks a bit too dark compared to the rest of her. I wouldn't blend her boob into the background as it's a foreground thing so should stick out a bit but apart from that I think you've done a brilliant job of remixing it but I think, at the moment, I prefer your original. Keep up the good works Plooms : D