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  1. Sabby Sleepy Panda Assassin

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    I see it in your eyes
    You have something against me
    Or at least I think you do
    Why do I get this feeling?
    I don't know

    I'm lost and can't find my way
    and you're not helping because you just stand there
    looking at me.
    Not trying to help.
    what's the matter with you?
    Why can't you help me?

    We've known each other from the start.
    Grew up together.
    Somehow, I had something against you
    You knew it too
    You kept pushing it to the limit where I couldn't take it anymore
    I was driving home one day
    and got into a car crash
    I was in a coma....
    ........ for 5 months

    After I woke
    You weren't there to see me
    you never did.
    Why? Do you hate me?
    I think I hated you too

    I saw you one day
    We talked
    Over the 5 months of my absence
    You took over my life
    You stole everything I had
    My boyfriend
    My friends
    My life
    So I told you to **** off
    and never talk to me again

    We never spoke
    ever again
    I was happy
    I was free
    Free from your pain ass gulit of pressure
    So farewell
     
  2. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I <3 that

    I liked how you made kind of a story type poem.
     
  3. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    0.o

    hun is there something i should be aware of that went on?


    Its very emotional and very well written...
    i'm surprised and it concerns me


    Are you okay or was this just a poem you felt like writing?
     
  4. Sabby Sleepy Panda Assassin

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    Nah, I just felt like writting it. Kinda hard to stop when you have a good idea going

    thank you ^^
     
  5. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    i know the feeling lol


    Still, great job =]
     
  6. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    yur welcome and i agree once i get an i dea if i dont write it down or start it i would forget
     
  7. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    hehe that was great :]

    damn, who'd piss off you. xD

    the person your talking about sounds like a *****.

    Anyways, this poem is awesome! Its beautiful and inner and you made it really nicely done.

    Great Job ^^