Story time with Jube: Hellstar Remina

So... the planet is really Ghroth?

Also, if the angry mob is really that stupid I have no concern for their living status at the end of this story. I really don't.

 

It's no surprise. Just think if this were really happening. You'd be so shocked and feeling helpless you wouldn't know what to do. So, what's the best thing to do? Blame it on someone.


Human nature man.

 

This is a very fast working mob.

That is dumb. If an alien planet/eldritch abominations comes towards the Earth my first instinct isn't going to be "blame the scientist and his daughter who he named after because it show'd up on her birthday." If anything I'm surprised they hadn't just thought of killing everyone who had the same birthday as the girl, ya know to be on the safe side.

 

Knock, knock.

 

So the guys charged with storming the motel are armed with axes? Why not use guns?

 

You gotta imagine the situation they're in. If you're defenseless, you'll want to look for a way to get out somehow. They are all in panic, and thinking that killing Remina and her father is like hope to them, so they go with it. If this were happening to us, you wouldn't be all "Oh well Im gonna die better just stay calm".




Im not good at explaining these things ok just think about it.

 

They remind me of the people from The Enigma of Amigara Fault.

 

That's what I had been thinking.​

 

You know, it'd be funny if it turned out to Earth all along.

I'm not saying it is impossible, I'm just saying how so many of them believe it and not call bullshit. You don't look at a natural disaster and go "let's blame the News Forecaster, he was the one to tell us about the hurricane."

But, this is fiction so I really should not bring logic into this.

 

There are explanations for natural disasters
There's no explanation for a planet that was centuries away suddenly taking notice of Earth and zipping over there in less then a month.

 

This is getting good.

That isn't the point. The point is that it is unrealistic that no one pointed out major flaws in these nutjobs' theory. What does the scientist and his daughter gain from this? What if the scientist had called the planet something else?
Did all these people just huff paint for six hours before the planet got as close as it did?

 

A planet that was centuries away suddenly took notice of Earth and zipped over there in less then a month thus doomnig them all.
Logical thinking doesn't really hold it's place anymore.







Shall upload the third chapter soon
No looking ahead kiddies.

 

Wow. They really stick it to him.

Personally I would have guessed the thing wasn't a planet after seeing what it did to Saturn. But again this is fiction, so I should not bring real world logic into this. But seriously, what if the scientist called the planet Bob? What then? Hunt down every guy named Bob?
Don't get me wrong, I'm really liking this story. It's just I tend to nitpick.

Okay.

 

The eye will turn.

 

Humans are not perfect the people in this story were driven to insanity they want to blame someone for it because they are defenseless so they turn against Remina and her dad as a means of looking towards something being able to do something hope



Get it?

 

Similar to how people turn to religion whenever things look dark.

Not the "sacred ritual".