Sorrow: for his nobody...

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  1. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    Sorrow for hisnoboy
    By:Sora Lexa

    your heart is heavy
    the shckles are tight
    the pain of sorrow comes straight through your heart
    your heart is binded by the chains inside
    being clutched and killed by the feelings inside you
    feeling the words pass through you
    being destroyed from the inside out
    the words killing u
    finding just the right point
    your mind hurts
    your hurt feelings
    your sorrowful heart

    END

    how was it?
     
  2. lookaheartless Twilight Town Denizen

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    Hm...

    Interesting, very interesting...

    I liked it.
     
  3. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    I really liked it SL!!!! Nice job!!!! :D
     
  4. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Seems emo....
    I LOVE IT!
    LOL!
    it was great!
     
  5. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    yeah, im sure a good bit of emos will be visiting this XD no-offense
     
  6. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Did you see mine?
    it's emo too!
     
  7. Azure Flame Banned

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    WOW IT'S AWESOME!!!! IT'S SO COOL! ALRIGHT LIL' BRO! :D