Sora's tale

i was super bored yesterday, so i decided to do this. people use to talk in poem to tell a tell of epicness. so, i decided to write sora's tale in hykoos (japanese form of poetry consisting of 3 lines. 5 sylbols on the first line, 7 on the 2ed line, and 5 on the last line.) so here is the first instalment, kingdom hearts one.

SORA'S TALE
(PT.1: KINGDOM HEARTS 1)​

Boy on an island
with friends he truly adores
trying to escape.

Friends lost to darkness
becoming a keyblade bearer
his island was lost

sent to traverse town
met a man named leon
and girl named yuffie

Told of the heartless
also told of the keyblade
untapped power held

he met new friends
named as donald and goofy
were sent to find him

Went to many worlds
looking for the king and friends
sealing the keyholes

Riku joined darkness
and a secret was revealed
keyblade was Riku's

Friends were sora's strength
the keyblade went to sora
riku was pwn'd hard

Sora found kairi
the princess had lost her heart
riku was ansem

Sora beat Riku
kairi's heart was inside him
killed himself for her

turned into heartless
Sora went to look for her
their love changed him back

Went to End Of World
needed to defeat Ansem
Sora's goal was met

Closed the darkness door
Riku and king lost again
kairi sent back home.​

COM hykoo coming soon.

(sorry if i spelled hykoo wrong. if i spelled it wrong, please tell me the propper spelling)

 

You did spell it wrong, its haiku.

I like it! The line that says 'Riku was slain' is missing a syllable though, in a haiku there should be 5 syllables in the first and last lines. Otherwise its fine, I'll be waiting for the CoM one =]

 

thanks for telling me that.
i'll adust it.

 

I liked it very much

 

As .Kairi. said, it's spelled as 'haiku', but otherwise, great job. :) Although Yuffie's name should be capitalized but anyhow...awesome job! Can't wait to see the CoM one!!​