Traditional Art sora drawing ^_^

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by vkfan2008, Aug 1, 2009.

  1. vkfan2008 Moogle Assistant

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    helo! i'm new here and i just want to share my sora drawing to everybody. and i hope u guys will like it.^_^ if i need some changing in some part please tell me. thank U!!
     

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  2. Juicy Chaser

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    wow, thats pretty damn good o.o;

    all I'd say is that the keyblade looks like its bending away rather than being straight, and Sora's chin is a tad sticky out/pointy. Otherwise, this is a fantastic piece of artwork :'D
     
  3. Kites Chaser

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    Holy moly great job. :3
    The only thing that needs fixing is his shirt sleeve. It doesn't need that many creases in it because it distorts the arm. Also his left eye looks a bit bigger than the right eye so adjust the proportions on that and it'll be perfect. Excellent job.
     
  4. jojoj13 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Left eye is bigger than right.
    Chin is point-ish (like Obsessed said)
    Hair looks puffier than usual (Maybe it's just me).
    Keyblade looks bent.
    Hand is out of proportion (Maybe it's also just me).
    Where is the arm for his right arm?

    Good job for trying to draw Sora. :)

     
  5. Rexyggor_thenewmember Twilight Town Denizen

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    I think the shirt sleeve could be a little smaller, rather then not having ruffles or whatever.

    uh.. everything else is already covered.
    maybe try to fix the keychain a little to be more proportioned?
     
  6. The Fuk? Dead

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    Great job I must say. The Keyblade starts skinny and goes fat, his chin is a little too pointy, and his keychain is a little off. All little things, but awesome job.
     
  7. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    Well this is rather good :3

    But there are however some things I'd like to point out:

    Crits:
    -The first thing I notice is his left arm, it's way to small to be in proportion, especially when you've made the sleeves of his shirt pretty big. You should make it a bigger so it matches the rest of the body, to make it accurate a hint would be to make the arm a bit bigger and the sleeve a bit smaller.
    - The shapes of his eyes are not the same. My advice would be to make the left eye more like the right one, because the left one resembles Sora the most.
    - The third one is the keyblade, as mentioned by others, I would actually advice you to use a ruler and lay straight out from the start of the shaft and draw 2 symetric lines from there.
    - Last one is the chin(a bit pointy), also like stated by others, IMO you should make the jaw bones just A TAD, bolder right before the chin (add some fat to them) not a lot, because Sora does indeed have a slender face build.

    Good points:
    -You did goooood with his hair! Now that's a very hard part, good job!
    -Except from what I've mentioned the proportions are pretty accurate
    -I like the facial expression and pose, you did good with those, I know you've copied a screen from the game, but in a very good way, and you made the facial expression slightly happier, I dunno if that was purposely, but I like it.
    -And you did a good job on the Kingdom Hearts text :3

    By all means, keep drawing, I can't wait to see more of your stuff.
     
  8. K u r o g a n e Traverse Town Homebody

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    It looks really good though his arm does look a bit off but other than that it's awesome! XDD
     
  9. What? 『 music is freedom 』

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    The eyes seem a bit inconsistent with each other, and Sora's chin seems more developed and angular than it should be. The positioning of his body looks just a bit strange to the left when looking through the perspective that is implied, and of course the keyblade seems to have a slight unneeded curve to it near the end, and the keychain itself shouldn't be that rigid. Besides that what relative shading there is on the picture is not bad, and I can see what image you were trying to reproduce on paper. Good for your attempt.
     
  10. tSG1 Chaser

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    Fantastic shading, and proportion :)

    Also, it's almost like Square Enix's 3D rendering lol.

    +Rep for awesome drawings :)
     
  11. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    Ah, finally someone who made a Kingdom Hearts related drawing again!

    I think this one looks really good. I especially like the job you've pulled off with his hair. The arm looks kinda off though, but I don't think I have to tell you that anymore :D

    Great drawing, keep up!
     
  12. krayzie Lionhart

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    it looks really good but kinda messed up on the top of the hair
    also the face looks a lil more like roxas lol but its good!