Digital Art Sora. Amazing Concept.

It really isn't amazing.
But it's a good concept.



Pretend the text isn't there. I'm choppin' that off pronto.

CnC?

 

Well, this is a pretty good concept, but there are a lot of things wrong. xD Firstly, the black on Sora's face is a little funky. Lower the opacity on that. Secondly, the depth is a little screwed up here. I'm guessing that Sora is the focal point, so sharpen the stuff around him. The stuff away from him (the wireframe C4D) should be blurred.

Otherwise, GJ.

 

I had a feeling there'd be ****loads wrong with it.


Agh, days getting worse for me.

The wireframe wasn't exactly as I wanted it to be. I wanted it to be more in visual than the background, which I really didn't know how to do in GIMP.

Eh, it's experiment. Thanks for the cnc :]

 

I like it. At least, it's better than mine! ^.^

 

*cough*

http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=12216

plzreadkthxbai

 

No, I really do. I'm not that mean!

 

... LOL Lucrecia.

You're supposed to give CnC. Constructive Critisism. It's in the rules of this section. You can't just type: "I really like it alot." You have to put why you like and try to suggest ways to make it better.

 

Okay, I don´t like the black in the face, too, you should make it a little bright, just a little (Brightness-contrast, the dodge tool, or do it the way you like more), other than that, is okay, maybe adding a light source in the dirrection where Sora is seeing, and maybe blur and sharpen areas for depth, anyways, Good Job ^^.

 

omgilovehissig.
The only thing I see is that you need to sharpen at least once more, or blur once more.

 

Wow, pretty good actually. I actually like the text on the side, but I'm not really cool with the silver. The black on face adds contrast which is good in my opinion. The whole thing looks pretty slick. The smudging and warping in the bottom right could be more... interesting. It needs to be in more focus.

It's good, but colour would help. I like how you made the edges show more.

 

Thanks guys. Remember to post in my latest topik.

 

OMG!!! THATS GOOD!!!

 

Um...
http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=12216