Sorry, Couch, but I'm not liking this one. You shouldn't have two focals, like in this one. Not to mention you duplicated both of them resulting in 4 focals. The focals are generally low-quality which takes away from the sig. >_> The text could use some work as well. Use fonts like Arial. They're generally pretty easy to work with. The only effect I can see is a Lens Flare/G Flare. What you should do is concentrate on one focal only, preferably the original Sonic. Work on his placement, so that it's easier to apply effects. Use effects such as Blurring, C4Ds, Brushes, etc. >_>