Sonic: Attack of the Heartless Sonic was resting in his quiet home of the Green Hill Zone, minding how own business, when Tails Flew from the east screaming for help, “Tails! What’s Wrong?!?†Sonic Exclaimed, “Sonic, it’s horrible, these weird black creatures are attacking Angel Island! Knuckles is barely holding them off!†Tails yelled, “Alright then, let’s go.†Sonic pulled out a green Chaos Emerald, “Chaos Control!†said Sonic. A green light shined from the Chaos Emerald, and Sonic and Tails were teleported to Angel Island. They appeared in front of the Master Emerald, only to be ambushed by the mysterious “Black Creaturesâ€, Sonic was Spin-Dashing and Jumping everywhere, while Tails was using his Arm-Cannon, but they just kept coming. Sonic was surrounded by these creatures, they all jumped onto him, covering him in Darkness. Just when it seemed like all hope was lost, Sonic saw a light, and it grew brighter and brighter until it was blinding. When the light faded, the creatures were gone, and Sonic was wielding a strange blade. It was Blue, there was a long Blade with a Spike ball that looked like Sonics Spin-Dash near the tip of the right of the blade. The handle was blue, with a wavy blue Hand Guard. There was a Key chain coming off the end, at the end of the chain was something that looked like a green Chaos Emerald. “Whoa, now this isn’t something you see everyday, Ok, Let’s have some fun!†Not noticing that Tails was missing, he sped across the island, looking for more creatures to fight off. He found Knuckles knocked out behind a bush, covered in bruises and a black eye. Sonic woke him up, “Knuckles, what happened?†said Sonic, “S-Sonic, The creatures, they took the C-Chaos emeralds…†Knuckles lost consciousness. Stay Tuned for Chapter 2!
Hm... it's interesting! Let me suggest a couple things though.... Make longer chapters, it gets everybody into the story more. Other than that, keep up the good work! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Shadow Appears! Chapter II Sonic lifted Knuckles onto his shoulder “I’ll take him back to Tails House to….Oh No! Tails! I Totally Forgot about him!” Sonic took Knuckles to Tails lab, and hid him in the basement. “Ok, now that Knuckles is safe, Time to find Tails!” Sonic ran back outside, only to be greeted by none other that Shadow the Hedgehog. “Shadow, no time to talk, I’ve got to..” “Shut Up, Sonic, we’ve got a score to settle.” Shadow opened his right hand up, dark lightning started to flash in his palm, and out of nowhere appeared a black blade similar to Sonics, but black. “Hey, I see you’ve got one too..” Sonic summoned his blade “Alright, let’s settle this!” Shadow jumped into the air and swung his blade at Sonic, Sonic deflected it, knocking away Shadow’s Blade, but it just re-appeared into his hand again “Nice try, but that won’t stop me!” Shadow said “Well, this may be harder that I thought” Thought Sonic. Sonic ran in a circular motion around Shadow, “I can’t follow his movements! Alright then..” Shadow pulled out a Red chaos emerald “Chaos Control!” Shadow slowed down time, making sonic look slower that a snail. Shadow hit Sonic with his Blade, stopping the Chaos Control, and knocking Sonic into Tails house. “Alright time to get serious, Spin Dash!” Sonic spun around in place, and then rolled at Supersonic speed towards Shadow, knocking him into the air, while in the air, Sonic got multiple hits on Shadow, then slammed him into the ground. “Ok, now you’ve really done it, Heartless, I summon you, Attack this blue fool!” More of the black creatures from Angel Island emerged from the ground and jumped at Sonic. His blade started to shine, and it started to act as if it had a mind of it’s own, it was slashing and swinging this way and that, eliminating the monsters. When they were all gone, the Blade stopped shining. “Whoa, that was awesome, so I guess these creatures are called ‘Heartless’..” Sonic looked around for Shadow, but he wasn’t there. “Hmph, I guess he ran off, now to Find Tails” Sonic ran all over the city looking for his flying friend, but no dice. Sonic stopped to take a break, when he heard a distant voice yelling “SONIC!” Can you guess who it is? PM me with an answer. DO NOT Reply with an answer. You Only have one try.
Chapter III “SONIC!!†a voice yelled from a distance “Oh, no, not HER!†sonic groaned, a pink hedgehog ran up behind Sonic and hugged him like she hadn’t seen him in 30 years. “Sonic, I knew I’d find you again!†she said “Amy, not now, I’ve gotta go find Tails!†sonic exclaimed, “Why don’t I help you then! It’ll be fun!†Amy said “As long as you don’t get a mushy and screw things up!†Sonic said “Alright, it’s a dealâ€. Sonic and Amy looked around the city (again), when all of the sudden, they heard a noise coming from Angel Island, It was falling(again)! “Oh, Sh*t, I totally forgot about the Master Emerald! Amy, we gotta go to Angel Island!†Sonic pulled out his Chaos Emerald “Chaos Control†they were immediately warped up to Angel Island. They saw a Dark figure, about Tails’ size, lifting the master emerald. “Stop! Put the emerald down!" The figure turned around, It looked just like Tails, but it was Black, and had eerie yellow eyes. “No…NO! Tails is a…a…†Sonic stopped “Sonic? Are you okay?†Amy asked “Grrr…rrr…Damn you Shadow…I will…Never…†Sonic started to turn a Blackish color “Oh, no! please don’t tell me my Sonic turning into one of those things!†Amy whined. Sonic stood up “Shadow..I…will…NEVER…†He put his arms in a DBZ style and yelled “FORGIVE YOU!!†Darkness was shooting out of the ground beneath him, engulfing him in it. When he came out, he was standing with his arms just hanging there. His quills were bent upwards, and he was just black…no yellow eyes. “S-Sonic…?†Amy was shaking “Amy…I…hate you! I’ve always hated you! You are one of the most annoying, loud mouthed people I have ever met, sometimes I question if your smarter than that ******ed cat Big!†Sonic exclaimed. A tear came to Amy’s eye, “No, Sonic would never say that! You’re not Sonic!†Amy yelled “Oh I’m Sonic alright…I’m DARK Sonic, now get the hell away from me!†Sonic waited for an answer, but nothing happened, he looked behind him and Amy was running at him with her Hammer, She swung at Sonic, and right as it was about to hit him, sonic stopped it with just one of his fists, the he grabbed the hammer, and threw it behind him along with Amy. They flew and flew until they completely out of site. Sonic turned back to get the master emerald, the Heartless Tails was flying away with it. Sonic aimed his hand at Tails, opened it and said “Dark Chaos Spear!†a long ray of Darkness shot from his hand, eliminating the Tails Heartless. The master emerald fell, but sonic flew over and grabbed it, and placed it back on its pedestal. Out of nowhere, Dark sonic went back into Normal Sonic. Was a little disoriented, but he still ran off the Island to go find Tails and Amy. But little did he know that when he shot Heartless Tails with Dark Chaos Spear, it also got the Master Emerald. Leaving a little black spot on it. Darkness and Chaos energy mixed together create Negative Chaos Energy. Since it was a Dark Chas attack, he inserted Negative Chaos Energy into the Master Emerald. A dark being resembling a Hedgehog came out of the Master emerald. “I am Reborn!†he said. Who is this mysterious being? Dun Dun DUUUUN!
lol, I needed something that would piss him off, btw, the next chapter will be coming soon, I havent had much time lately Chapter IV Sonic was back in the city, asking random people if they knew where Tails and Amy were, none of the people he asked knew. He looked back at Angel Island, he felt a weird disturbance coming from the Island. "That energy...I've felt it before..No, it can't be him, me and Shadow took him out a long while ago....I should go check it out." Sonic pulled out his Chaos Emerald, "Chaos Control." he was teleported up to the Island. He appeared in front of the Master Emerald. (If you havent seen the flash movie, 'Sonic: Nazo Unleashed', then you should see it before reading ahead.) "Heh heh, why if it isn't Sonic the Hedgehog. It's been a while, hasn't it?" a voice said "It has, Nazo the Hedgehog" Sonic said. "Thank you for bringing me back, Sonic, I Apreciate it very much." Nazo said, Sonic had a confused look on his face "What're you talking about?" Sonic asked "When you went mad with power, and shot the Fake Tails that I created, you also hit the Master Emerald with that Dark attack of yours. Thus shooting Negative Chaos Energy into the Master emerald, thus recreating me" Nazo Explained. "Alright then, I'll send you back to the hell hole you came from!" Sonic said. He then summoned his Keyblade. "What? A Keyblade?!? Where did you get that?" Nazo exclaimed, "Keyblade, so that's what its called, alright then, Eat This!" Sonic tossed his keyblade at Nazo, but he teleported out of the way. Sonic summoned the blade back into his hand.Nazo Appeared behind Sonic "Chaos Torrent!" Nazo shot a ray of red Chaos Energy at sonic, engulfing him in it. "Is that all you got? I would've expected more from the Keyblade Master!" Sonic was laying on the ground in horrible pain. ".as.er .m..ald, ..ve .e .our p.wer" sonic mumbled "What did you say?" Nazo asked " I said, Master Emerald, Give me your Power!" Sonic yelled as Light engulfed our blue speedy hero, when it was gone, Sonic's Quills were bent up, just like Dark Sonic, but instead of his color being Black, it was Yellow. Sonic summoned his Keyblade, which had turned yellow as well. "Show me what you've got, Nazo!" Sonic flew at Nazo, hitting him this way and that, then slammed him into the ground. "Super Sonic Wind!" Sonic shot a wave of yellow Chaos Energy at Nazo. It hit Nazo, but he disappeared. He apeared Miles into the air, "Dark Chaos Bomb!" a Large Bamb-Like ball grew in Nazo's hands, once it was about the size of the Super Bowl Dome, he shot it at the Island. When it hit the Island, it was so bright, that even the people in the city had to cover they're eyes. When the light faded, Sonic was in a place he had never been before, it was an Island, similar to Angel Island, but it was in the ground. There were palm trees, boats and things of that nature everywhere. Sonic reverted back into his normal form. "Hold it right there, Heartless!" A voice said. Sonic turned around, and said "Hey, wait, I'm not a Heartless! STOP!" Who is this person mistaking our Speedy Hero for a Heartless? Find out in the next chapter of Sonic: Attack of the Heartless!
Chapter V Ok, back from where we left off. Chapter V "Hold it right there, Heartless!" a voice said. Sonic Turned around and said "Hey, Wait, I'm not a Heartless! STOP!" Sonic yelled as a boy with spikey brown hair ran at him with a blade that looked a little bit like Sonic's, except, it had a Silver handle, a Golden hand guard, and a long Sliver Blade that looked like a key. He jumped at Sonic and said "Take This!" the boy said "Sonic covered his face and his keyblade had summoned itself somehow, and blocked the boy's attack. "Huh? a Keyblade!" he said, Sonic uncovered his face "y-yeah, I see you've got one too" Sonic said "Well, you cant be a Heartless...so that means your with me, so, Whats your name, Spikey?" the boy asked "Ok, 1: don't call me spikey, and 2: my name is Sonic. Sonic the Hedgehog." Sonic said "Hey, I've heard of you, you're that former Video Game star who's career got ruined because of a crappy voice actor! his name was....Jason Griffith, anyway, My name is Sora!" he said "Nice to meet ya, Sora!" Sonic held out his hand, "Same to you, Sonic" Sora said grabbing Sonic's hand and giving him a handshake. "So, where am I?" sonic asked "This is Destiny Islands, the real neighborhood is over on the other island, this island is where me and my friends come to play." Sora explained. Sonic looked around, after about 5 minutes Sonic asked "So, how do you get to the other Island?" sonic asked "Boats" sora said "B-B-Boats...uh-oh, that aint good.." Sonic worried "How come?" Sora asked "Me and water dont mix, 1: because, Im blue and water's blue, if I fall, no one will find me, 2: I can't swim.." sonic said, "Don't worry, Sonic, you wont fall off." Sora assured him. When they reached the other Island, Sonic saw a familiar Two-Tailed friend of his, it was Tails! "T-Tails! It's you! How'd you get here!" Sonic said, "I used my new Trans-Dimensional Portal to get here, I meant to go to the demension where Cosmo was when I......Took her out...but I must have mis-calculated the cooridanates" Tails explained. Sonic looked at him with a confused look "You did wha....?" Sonic said "I used a Portal I built to Find Cosmo, But I put the wrong numbers in and I ended up here!" Tails exclaimed. "Ooooh, now I get it" Sonic said, "So, who're these two?" Sonic asked "These are Riku and Kairi. My best friends" Sora said.
