Son of Sora

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  1. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well I couldn't wait any longer for some reason. But Harvest Moon...it'll wait because I don't know who should be the main, the male or female, etc. But I'll give this a short summary.

    The son of sora is about..well the title but he then hears a very interesting war in his history class and wants to find out more. He think's it's related to his parents that are missing or have died. ( my words are no sense)

    So, that's it. Hope you enjoy this new story I'm making, critize if you like, I'll edit it later.




    Son of Sora: Chapter 1.




    Katsurou is my name. I turned 16 three months ago. I'm a male, a dude- what ever you call it. Appearantly, I'm an unpopular guy! No one seems to... like me. What ever that reason is, it can't deal with the weird thing I did in Science class, wasn't on purpose! Anyways, I have blue aqua eyes. My grandma says I have my mom's eyes. I have dark brown hair, spiked on the sides, back and top. Grandma says it's annoying to find my hair sticking up everywhere, just like my father. Today, I wearing my uniform for school, it's Monday. Maroon vest, white t-shirt under, black skinny jeans and orange plaid shoes.

    The way I dress isn't the best, but atleast I actually wear stuff! I've been bullied for um- er- since I started middle school. Everyone found me strange and from then on, I've been hiding my face for some times. One thing that nobody knows is that... I like books. I enjoy reading-


    " Katsurou! I didn't raise you to day dream!" hollered an old lady, grandma. She had a faint red hair with plenty strands of white hair. She was old alright. I turned my head, looking at my angry grandma.

    " I wasn't day dreaming, I was thinking." I tapped my temple with my left index finger. Grandma glared at me and walked over behind me. She raised her hand in the air and flung it down, smacking the back of my head. I squeezed my eyes, tightening my teeth.

    " Hurts huh? Well, hmph, to bad! You're just like your father, only worse!" That caught my attention.
    " Like my father? I haven't even seen my dad's face! Over ten years grandma! Ten years.." my voice lowered, I lowered my head down in shame.

    " So? It's your father's fault for getting in such danger-"
    " That's it! Danger, what danger, grandma! I know nothing about this and here we are! You telling me something that I don't even know about!" I placed my hand on top of my chest. Everything my grandma brought up about my parents, it'll always disturb me.

    My grandma walked a few steps away from me, her arms crossed. " Well, you have to head to school. We'll talk about this later-"

    " Later!? Grandma! You say that all the time but it never happens-"
    " Just go to school!" she barked at me. I stood there for a minute and turned my back of her. Storming off, I snatched my string bag off the wooden chair. I walked out, stepping on the door mat and then- slam. I shut the door hard and walked off.


    As I walked off I held my bag by the string with my right hand. There was warning one from gram's. I have to watch my words, she might beat the 'hell outta me.


    ~ History Class~

    I settled down in my seat getting my binder out with my history notes. Wonder what we'll learn today. I rested my chin on top of my palm, my elbow against the desk. Then, there was the bell. Then the door, opening, revealing my history teacher, Ms.Alveye. She was a nice teacher, what caught my attention was her emerald eyes. I swear, not everyday do I see people with those kind of eyes.


    " Alright class, settle down." she calmy said, waiting for her students to be quiet. She smiled. Afterwards, she walked over to her desk, brushed the sheets of paper and sat on top of the desk. Boy was that cool...to me. She took a glance around the classroom and began.

    " Today we won't be working. Why? Well, today is the day where each teacher talks about the war that has happened years ago. Over ten years, and today is the anniversery. In this period, we are hear to discuss about this story. Many of you may not know and some will. But years ago, there were brave warriors. More than five I should say."
     
  2. Sonic the Hedgehog The Blue dude is back!!

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  3. ♦Demon♥Angel♦ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    That dad's in the few isn't he? And your not going to tell me. Well I agree with Roxas 95. AWSOME!!!
     
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    same here!!!!
     
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    Wow! Fantastic chapter for a great story! I can't wait to read more. :D I'll be looking forward to it.
     
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    Hi Friendly_Heartless! *waves* OH YEAH!! I LIKE THE STORY!!
     
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    This looks good.
     
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    love the story! cant wait for the next chapter! hi sissy! hi friendly heartless!
     
  9. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I'm glad all of you enjoyed the first chapter. I'll be typing more of this.
     
  10. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    Yeah! I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
     
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    cant wait till the next chapter comes out!
     
  12. rexmildd15 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I agree with your friends.I like it.
     
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    Hmm...so far, I like it.

    Write more! I wanna know what happened!

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    Wow.That really kept my attention.I have to say Mexony,your stories are always interesting no matter what.I loved it.Can't wait for more.
     
  15. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thanks everyone, changing the date, I'll probably have the new chapter next week or in a few days. I'm currently catching up on KHRtE. Thanks for the comments, really appreciate it.
     
  16. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    KHRtE: Thanks everyone for the support. May be the wrong place to post this but...for KHRtE members, I've been putting the story on a hold. Due to my suprise I'm putting ( might as well) a combo chapter. I haven't started because I'm working on my Scrapbook, yes.


    SoS: I'm glad you all enjoy the story, I'll be continuing this story until I've reached the end of my ideas for this story. I appreciate the fact that members like the stories I create. Contains some bad language...it got me into the mood.




    Son of Sora: Chapter 2.





    What my teacher is saying now...is it possibly true? No... the only war I know is me and my grandma's! But what ever my History teacher is saying, sounds innocent. Damn, she get's me all the time.

    I raised my hand, hoping she would notice me. I had a question. The History teacher turned her head, she gave me a smile and nodded me me. " Yes, Katsurou?" her smile was so warm. It made me feel a little nervous.

    " Um miss...who were these warriors? Also, why is there such thing of an anniversery?" It had to be let out. I could hear some students starting a conversation and others gasping. But all this was true. My History looked up to the ceiling and then down.

    " That's a good question. The warriors were mostly male but there were females. Now exactly were five or over. It was like a huge group but small. But they sure did fought their lives to save us. Some of you were very young at this time. This anniversery is to remember the brave warriors who fought. If they hadn't have won then we wouldn't be alive at this time." my History teacher had a serious look. Perhaps she experienced it or... someone related to her had fought. Everything it very confusing to me.


    " Miss, do you know the name of some warriors?" asked a student, sitting in the back of the class. His think glasses on and messy blonde hair. She nodded.

    " I can name only two. Sora and a female. I do know her name but can't remember properly. It starts with a K though, sorry." I felt a shock in my heart, it was like I knew this person. But never met. I wish I knew more about this war. If I did, I could learn so much.

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    In the afternoon, I've asked my grandma permission to stay at the Library after school. She laughed at me and accepted. Telling me that I need to experience many more things.

    I walked down the aisle of books. All lined up, alphabetically by last name. If I ask the librarian about the war then she would direct me to the aisle. But no, I enjoy hunting the book then being brought to it. Annoys me.

    " Your Katsurou... from Math class?" asked a soft female voice. I turned around and saw a Ami. The girl I cared for but never noticed me, now...oh joy! She had dark brown hair with tiny maroon streaks. She had black eye liner, heart earrings. She wore...well, her school uniform. I nodded to her, hesitated for a moment. I have never spoken to her outdoors except for a group assignment.

    " Yeah, that's me." I said, heat was rising up in my body. She smiled and walked up to me.
    " What are you doing here in the Library? I hardly ever see you in here." That suprised me.
    "Well, I'm here researching about the war that happened years ago." Ami needs to know this, she might know. But the other reason is because I like her, alot.

    " Oh, the war. It's sad but yeah. I know where the books are, stay here. It may take me a couple of minutes because it's on the second floor." Ami gave me a rosy smile and skipped off. Cute. I stood and examined the books standing on the shelf. All about the history of hearts. It could give me information but only the heart.

    " Hey, Katsurou. What's happening?" I jumped, startled. It was Alex Nileshite. He was captain of the soccer team, many more. I gave him a wave. He looked at me, his eyes frowning. " So...what were you doing with Ami?" he stomped closer to me. Oh gosh. I may like her, but she isn't single. She has a boyfriend. The one standing infront of me is her boyfriend. Great. He'll probably beat the cra-

    " Listen buddy, I don't want you near my girl!" Alex growled, he grabbed me by the collar. He then dragged me over to the wall, and pushed me against it. My back and head hit the wall, the sound echoed. " I didn't do anything!" I said, it was true. Well...I'm just tricking him.

    " Yeah right! You're trying to get to her. Anyone who interfere's with my girl get's a beating! Like you. You don't even know what it's like to get beaten up, try not to. My gang and I don't want to ruin your face." He coldly said. That made me mad, ruin my face? His insults are nothing but crap.

    " I'm not getting to Ami. She's just a girl I know in Math class. If you ruin my face then you'll see what'll happen to your face, ptut!" I spat at him. My spit hitting his right cheek. I was so pumped up with my short speech that I haven't realized what I've just done. Alex wiped the spit off and then pulled me by the collar. He was dragging me to...the exit!?

    Aw man! I was done for. Alex kicked the door opened and dragged me. I tried to hold back, but damn was his strong. No wonder he was captain.

    " What're you going to do? Take me to the fair? Tell me your feelings?" I was teasing. Alex gripped on my collar tightly, he glared at me. As he dragged me, we met a dark alley. Dead end. He threw me to the wall and punch his fist into his palm.

    " Why so serious dude?" I laughed a little, he would'nt possibly beat me up.

    " Shut up." he said. His punch raised, with a swing-

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    " Quick moving Katsurou!" hollered the old woman. My grandma. I had a bruised eye, scratches on my arms, legs. Bruises on my back and neck.

    " It's your fault for getting in this mess! I'm not letting you go to the Library no more! If this is what your saying then hell no!" she said. My grandma stood up, finally finish bandaging me. I was sitting on the stool, it hurts to move. My grandma walked over to the counter, opening the cabinet. I watched her take something out. Watching, she opened the small box and pulled out a cigar. WHAT? Reaching to her pocket, she pulled out a lighter. Moving her finger quickly, a tiny flame came up. Already my grandma had the cigar in her move, she moved in closer until the flame touched the cigar.

    " Grandma what the hell!?" I was suprised, I had never seen my grandma smoke before. Unless... unless she was hiding it from me or I never seen it. She looked at me, putting the lighter away. She used her two fingers, the cigar inbetween her middle and index finger. She blew out an air or smoke, in the color of blue and dark gray. The atmosphere was beginning to smell bad. The form of liquir and other alcohols involved. This was such a nasty smell.


    " What're you looking at? What? You suprise that I smoke?" she raised an eye brow, her bored eyes and wrinkles. I nodded.

    " Grandma, you could get lung cancer, have a disease!" I was pointing out the facts. Haven't she ever thought about the consequences!?

    " So? I'm old already, I'm near my death. Old people don't live long kid. Katsurou... you don't have to be suprised. Besides, the cigar to me it sweet." She put the cigar back in her mouth and walked off. Her slippers dragging on the floor. It made an annoying noise, like sandals walking on the wooden floor with sand on top.

    " Sweet?" I walked over to the cabinet and grabbed the pack of cigars. I examined them, they were plain but the original. No wonder she never let me take out her garbage. She's hiding things from me. I grabbed the stool over and stood on it. Looking in the cabinet, I wanted to see what else she was hiding from me. Great, alcohol. A bottle of wine, great Sicanders beer? What is she doing? Trying to kill herself. But...I'm curious. What did it taste like?


    I opened the pack and took out a cigar, it felt some odd. It was like wraps of hard tissue with such a mineral end. I opened the drawer below and saw a lighter. Heh, my luck. I slipped on hand quickly and then saw a flame. I put the cigar in my mouth and moved in closer for the flame. There it goes. The flame touched the end of the cigar. Right away came a heat inside. I put the lighter away and felt a rush in my mouth. I then felt it covering my whole mouth. Obviously, I did the same like my grandma did. I took the cigar out of mouth and coughed out the smoke. It tasted so nasty, it was like the black crust inside your mouth with gasoline. Well...in my opinion.


     
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    Once again,I loved it.Can't wait for the next chapter.
     
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    Thanks for the comments, members. I really appreciate having my story noticed.