Well, I was doing something outside and this awesome mass of words came into my head. I thought i ought to show you: How do you do it? How do you do it? You make me smile How do you do that? After I’ve cried for a while How do you do it? You make me feel warm How do you do that? When my emotions are all torn How do you do it? You make me feel all bright How do you do that? In the darkest of the night How do you do it? You’re always there How do you do that? You’re like my brother but you care How do you do it? You’re here everyday How do you do that? You never fade away How do you do it? You stick up for me at times How do you do that? With that innocence in your eyes How do you do it? You make me love life How do you do that? Without putting me through strife How do you do it? You don’t even call But no matter how you do that We’re friends. That is all. So, whaddya think?
For some reason, i don't like the repetition of "How do you do it." Kinda lame. I like it other than that one thing. Great job!
beautiful! I love how it repeats "How do you do it?", but it makes it sound like too much repetition when you also repeat "How do you do that?"... but other than that, beautiful! ^^
