Wow the eyes really stand out. You made the lighting work well on the face and it looks like light is shining down on her. which is really cool. Only thing though is just make the text a bit more visible. Other than that, great job. :3
I tried making the text blend in with the background...but it didn't really come out the way I wanted it to. Thanks for the cnc though, I'll try and edit the text so it's more visible. c: I'll put up a v.2 soon~