Digital Art something new

I was playing around with this a bit, how'd this one come out?

 

It's pretty good, although I cannot really read the text and I think that Zack could be a bit bigger.

 

I like it, although I think that the colour over Zack's sword is a little to much over his sword.

 

I really like it! Making Zack small and having the color overlapping him a bit, makes it look like he's fading away into mist. ^^ Overall, it's a nicely done, emotional sig. *give kudos*

 

its so-so but you should try enlarging the text and add in some effects to get some flow into the sig.