Some lyrics i wrote (hip - hop, and metal)

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  1. rIkUsBlaD3_999 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Yeah i've been writing some songs recently...here are the lyrics to a few of em

    HEART OF LIES (metal):
    Deep down inside
    beneath the light
    that you use to lure everyone in
    theres something hidden
    something covered up
    something evil lost within
    sometimes you can
    SEE THE FIRE IN YOUR EYES
    YOU GOT A HEART OF LIES
    HEART OF LIES
    LIES! LIES! LIES!
    COVERED UP BY YOUR
    Pain
    You got cuts
    round your wrist/the ones that
    that were made for no reason at all
    what pain did you feel?
    did you feel as much as me?
    yet i still come to answer your call
    sometimes you can
    SEE THE FIRE IN YOUR EYES
    YOU GOT A HEART OF LIES
    HEART OF LIES
    LIES! LIES! LIES!
    COVERED UP BY YOUR
    Pain
    When you go/i go somewhere else as well
    the deepest darkest dreaded place
    the night is closing in
    the night is closing in
    the blood now freezing in your icy grasp
    the night is closing in
    i'm falling into the dark
    LIES! LIES! LIES!
    sometimes you can
    SEE THE FIRE IN YOUR EYES
    YOU GOT A HEART OF LIES
    HEART OF LIES
    LIES! LIES! LIES!
    COVERED UP BY YOUR
    Pain

    Hip Hop Anthem (hip hop/rap)

    At the start of it all
    there was nothin/f**kin
    rythm and the beat and the side line to rhyme with it
    your pain/the suffering that you felt
    when we got our lives f**ked by your hopeless self/you
    felt like you were just bein ignored
    you find a knife on the floor and f**kin slit
    you don't know what you're doin one little bit
    cos before you know it/you got
    rollin down your sleeve/coz
    no-one can see whats up there/wear
    a long sleeved T-shirt and a long jacket
    you can drink all you want and just do it more/f**k
    F**K IT!
    Now/the feelin is eatin you
    burnin you up to a f**kin pulp/the darkness is comin
    theres no way to escape
    you can run all you want but your runnin is fake/coz
    you know that its pullin you in but you havent got the strength to push it back
    till you get whatya want/whatya love
    you're the one that i love but i'm the one that you hate/i
    know that i hate you too/i hate
    everythin about you baby/but i dream about
    kissing you every single day/you're just
    f**king with me b**ch and you have been all along/cozya
    bein eaten by the pain of love/love
    that you're not really in/you just
    think you are but really you're not
    cos real love means
    throwin it up and spittin it out/coz
    ya know you've been rejected and you don't give a sh*t
    you got so much to live for
    you got so much to die for/coz
    everythin else is just a waste of time
    you do really babes
    you know you do but i cant do anythin about it coz i'm
    f**kin p*ssed
    but this time in the head/just like you were
    the time you did it
    you made the worst mistake of your life babes/i hope you know that
    so no-one has to tell you that ever again
    coz i hate to see you hurt/i dont
    wanna see you cry/coz i
    love you and i know it i just don't know why/and
    i know i shouldnt judge you by this/coz
    its like the worst thing you've ever f**king done in your life
    you crazy b**ch
    you got attitude and i like that
    i'm gonna quit this stupid game/quit it
    just like you
    your scars are gone/you're back
    just rewind it all/that
    now the
    i wanna give in/be just like you
    but i know that what i want is gonna cost you
    so i'm just gonna f**kin carry on and do this s**t
    but if i can't i'm just gonna jump up and rock and do the bit that
    i couldnt do before/b**ch
    you're losin the rythm
    you'r losin the beat
    the hip-hop anthem
    get movin ya feet
    this is f**kin hip-hop
    this is rap
    LIKE YOU'VE NEVER SEEN IT BEFORE
    FROM THE
    TOP!!!

    (not finished yet)


    tell me what ya think :P
     
  2. MissInvisible Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Interesting. I liked it :) What inspired you to write these lyrics? I thought that it was pretty good. It would be nice to hear how it would sound like when sung, lolz.
     
  3. Hubba-Bubba-Bubbles Hollow Bastion Committee

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    that is really good exept there's alot of F words lolz
     
  4. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey you did really good with this, I like the first one more. Lolz it'd be nice to hear music to these.
     
  5. rIkUsBlaD3_999 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    More music pplz :) Emo metal

    the verses in this song are fast paced and the chorus heavy and screamy.


    So/there/you/are/lead
    singer and guitarist of a heavy metal band
    theres love in your lyrics and a pistol in your hand
    you sing a/bout her/every single day
    even all the s**t you say just makes her wanna stay
    she'd be a wreck without you/you've helped her through all
    and shes the one to come to you and catch you if you fall
    shes got a knife under her pillow/and hair dyed black
    she swore at your mother and your mother swore back
    coz she ran away from home/when she/was/four/teen
    with you/and some other people she had never seen
    you made love on a train/and stole a boat
    you were wanted for murder/slit by the throat
    YEAH
    YOU CAN'T
    RUN AWAY FROM
    LOVE
    LOVE
    LOOOOOOVE!!!
    -THATS PURSUING YOU!-
    YOU CAN'T RUN
    RUN AWAY FROM
    LOVE!!
    thats persuing you
    And/then/she/dies
    coming out of the pub, late at night
    she's p*ssed/drunk/she nearly started a fight
    she gets run over by a f**king lorry
    and her last f**king words were: 'I am Sorry'
    remember that old school tie
    of hers?/the one you tried to burn/to burn away her lies?
    you choked yourself to death with it because of it/SUICIDE
    you did it straight away they say/you never even cried
    YOU'LL GO/TO HELL WITH HER
    AND BURN/IN THE FIRE
    JUST LIKE/ALL THE CIGARRETTES YOU'VE SMOKED
    YOU
    Liar
    YEAH
    YOU ****IN CAN'T
    RUN AWAY FROM
    LOVE!
    LOVE LOVE LOVE YEAH!!!
    YOU CAN'T
    RUN AWAY FROM
    LOVE!
    LOVE!
    LOOOOOOOOOOOVE!!!!!
    -THATS PURSUING YOU-
    YOU CANT
    RUN AWAY FROM
    LOVE
    thats pursuing you...
     
  6. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    I really like what you have done with the lyrics ^^​