Traditional Art Some Drawings I did not long ago ~

I can assure you guys I didnt take longer than half an hour on each of them when I had the chance to draw these drawings c:
Feel free to criticize, but please be nice when you're doing so. xoxox
I'll post some more later c:

http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/207/a/e/Haruhi_from_Ouran_by_Fruityloopy_cherry.jpg

http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/207/5/f/Pikachu_by_Fruityloopy_cherry.jpg

http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/207/4/3/Dalk_by_Fruityloopy_cherry.jpg

http://th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/207/d/2/Lily_Potter_by_Fruityloopy_cherry.jpg

 

They're pretty good :3 I would say to watch the placement of the head and neck as well as the slope of the shoulders(female shoulders have more of a slope, male shoulders are straighter). Also the last one is cut off at an odd place. You never want to cut off at the neck, wrists, or ankles. I really like the shading and cross-hatching.