Some Days Some days we're the best of friends. Some days, I feel as if you hate me. Some days we talk on hours on end, Some days you barely even speak. I hate the feeling I get, when I feel like you leave me And move on to someone new. I feel like an old picture left in the dust. Forever forgotten. But some days, our friendship is a must. And you are the only one that I trust. To tell my little secrets to. I somehow love and hate where we have gotten. I wrote this rather quick. I just had the urge to write some poetry. I have not attempted to write it in a while, so if it sucks, don't be afraid to tell me.
This...reminded me of something. >>;; Anyway, very good. Even though you haven't written something in awhile, I liked it. Although, it kind of felt as if it lacked a little emotion. Just a little. Or it's just me. Other than that, I liked it. :3
Awesome! I just need more emotion. Thanks for the critique, and for liking it. I found out tonight that I really like writing poetry.
That was incredibly short but sweet :3 The repitition was nice, but I'd just like to remind you that you dont need to punctuate the end of each line- they can be run-along-lines. Just thought I'd point this out since it seems at times you've got full stops/periods in the middle of sentences. :3 Urges to write poetry are good x3
A recognizable phenomenon, those mixed feelings. Anyway, I hope you don't stop writing now, because you're quite talented. I enjoyed reading this poem!
The last half of the poetry was probably the must memorable in the entire thing, at least for me.It wasn't bad at all, really.
