So...confused...

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  1. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    What do I do,
    the thought running through my head,
    to do this or that,
    that is what I said.

    Somtimes I get so confused,
    as to what I am to do,
    do I go for it, or should I stay away,
    the answers are fused.

    I reach out my hand,
    so that you may take it,
    however recoil it slowly,
    afraid of the answer I will get.

    I open my mouth to speak,
    however slowly close it too,
    unsure of what to say,
    covered in a veil of meek.

    Open my arms,
    taking only a second to close them too,
    wanting to show I care,
    but so confused about what to do.

    Atleast in my thoughts,
    and in that special place in my heart,
    I realize as long as neither of us gives up hope,
    nor shall we ever be apart.

    Maybe I can't really speak to you,
    things aren't the way they used to be,
    but as long as I know you haven't given up hope either,
    I know one day we can be together again under a new hue.
     
  2. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Wow. Good job. I like poems like yours.
     
  3. Fellangel Bichael May

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    Nice! Is this your first poem?