Digital Art Smuding/C4D style

heres the old smudge and c4d everyone used to do.its meh but something worth while.had to do something in this 100 degree room lol.

 

Yeah, it's 'Meh' alright =/ I dun like it very much.

A lot more blending could go into this.

 

a bit too bright and overcontrasted. you have that big white spot that should be acting as a light source to the stock, but it doesnt really affect it at all. A foreground and some depth would help this one out tremendously.

 

To be honest, I don't like it very much because of the effects behind the person.

 

To be honest I don't really like it.
It's a bit bright and the backround is a little wacky.