Traditional Art sketch for a pic I'm working on

I've entered a contest on deviant art and i have to draw a picture of Sasuke as an angel.
~~>clickies plz<~~

How do you guys think its going so far? I'm gonna draw the lines and colour it in on the computer.

 

This is pretty good. The arms seem a little small, but maybe that's just me. I'd like to see the finished product :)

 

it looks great i can't draw very well so thats what i'm taking art for and i might want a anime drawing book though nice job hopefully your finished drawing will win

 

I would take off the bandages, fix the mouth, and add detail to the feathers. Thats all I can see wrong with it. It looks good so far.

 

very nice i really like hat you did to the wings and his hair *o* ! *thumbs up*

 

I am liking it so far.

I'm not a Naruto fan, but I think its fine.

I like the bandages, and I know it isn't finished yet.

Add some detail to the wings, make sure the shading works.

Good luck with the contest ^^

 

Ooooh. Nice job! I kinda don't like the wings that way. I just like teh outline and then put some feathers or some jagged lines representing the feathers on teh wings but good job! I hope you'll win!^^ Good luck!