Skateboarding Tragedy...Roxas's Story Chapter 2

Chapter 2

Roxas and Xaldin waited for everyone to show up before they even started…Once everyone was seated…(Xaldin’s group and one pick nick table, and Roxas’s at another)… Xaldin and Roxas both parked their bikes beside of each other while they were still on them...They were about 2 yards apart, and Xemnas stepped forward…
“Flipping a coin, call either heads or tails… Winner chooses game and goes first†Xemnas said…He tossed it into the air…
“Tails!†Roxas yelled… It landed on heads…
“Yes!†Xaldin yelled…
“What’s the game Xaldin?†Xemnas asked…
“Copy-cat…†Xaldin answered…
“Okay…†Roxas answered…
“One round...3 tries…person with the most lands win…†Xaldin said…
“Fine with me,†Roxas said… Xaldin got in front and was getting ready for his copy-cat move…
“I’m getting this on tape!†Xigbar yelled…He got out a handheld video camera and started rolling…
“Try this,†Xaldin said… Xaldin raced down the bowl… He peddled up a wall, and came down with a 360 left spin… Then ran back up the other wall and landed in front of Roxas…
Roxas looked at Xaldin, knowing he can’t do that move…
“Okay, let’s go…†Roxas said… He rode really fast downwards the wall, then rode up the other wall, he tried to do a 360 left spin, but couldn’t land it…His tire bounced off the edge as he tried to land it, and Roxas fell off front wards over the handle bars…The bike crashed just barley a little bit to the left…
Roxas got on his knees and yelled..
“I’m okayâ€â€¦Axel was worried that he could really be seriously hurt…
“One for me…†Xaldin said…Roxas looked at him with a mean face…
“My turn,†Roxas said as he pushed his bike up the wall, then climbing out…
“Okay, what are we going to do, a grind?†asked Xaldin… Roxas stared at him.
“No, we are going to do a 360 back flip…†Roxas answered…
“You got to be joking Roxas… You can’t do that move yet!†Xaldin yelled…
“What do you care? Afraid I’ll get hurt?â€â€ Roxas asked…
“I actually am Roxas…I’d rather forfeit than you get hurt…†Xaldin said…
“Okay, watch this,†Roxas said… He ran down the hill and up the other side of the wall, he turned around, went up the other wall, and came back down… He peddled really hard, an went up the other wall, and did a 360 back flip over the ground and into the next bowl, then rode up that wall and landed it…
Xaldin was speechless…
“C’mon Xaldin, beat this punk!†Marluxia yelled… Xaldin nodded, then attempted the move… He ran up the wall, then down, like Roxas did, but when he did his back flip, he pulled to hard and landed on the pavement, instead of inside the bowl, luckily he wasn’t hurt…
“The score is tied Xaldin… What’s your last call?†Roxas asked as he and Xaldin met up at the pick nick tables…
“Skate boarding while grinding off the wooden rail,†Xaldin said while pointing to a staircase…
“Okay, let’s get going,†Roxas said… Roxas put his bike next to all of his gear and got out his skateboard, but forgot to put on protective gear…Xaldin did…
“Okay, let’s go!†Xaldin said…They both ran to the top of the staircase…
Xaldin got on the skateboard and headed for the ramp…He jumped onto the rail and slid down the 10 foot long rail… He landed perfectly…
“Yes!†yelled Xaldin… Roxas’s last chance was coming up…Everyone was counting on him… Roxas got on his board, and headed for the rail… Once he jumped on he slide about halfway down…That’s when the problem started… His board slid to the side, and at the end, he fell off his board, landing on his back with his leg under it He rolled and hit his face on the pavement…He was skidding down the pavement the come to a halt.
“AHH!†Roxas yelled…Everyone ran over…
“GOD!†Roxas yelled again…Roxas had his arms over his leg and he was on his side after he rolled….
“Roxas are you okay?†Axel asked…
“GOD DOES IT LOOK LIKE I’M OKAY?†Roxas yelled again… Roxas screamed out in pain… Xigbar came over and started filming this…Roxas was lying on his side, while holding his leg… Axel tried to remove Roxas’s shoe.
“GOD DONâ€T TOUCH IT! IT HURTS!†Roxas yelled…
“Okay man…where does it hurt?†Vexen asked…
“God! It hurts on my back and leg for god’s sake!†Roxas yelled…
“Okay, nobody touch him…†Vexen said… Roxas was surrounded by everyone… Larxene go cell phone and dialed for an ambulance…
“GET THAT CAMERA OUT OF MY FACE!†Roxas yelled at Xigbar who was right in front of him… Xigbar backed up...
“How bad is it?†Roxas tried to ask calmly…
“You’re face is scratched up pretty bad, and you possibly fractured your femur…†Vexen said…
“Oh god,†Roxas said while starting to cry…Roxas closed his eyes tightly…
“They’re sending an ambulance…†Larxene said as she got off the phone…
“How soon will they be here?†Vexen asked…
“In about 10 minutes…†Larxene said…
“God someone help me please!†Roxas yelled…

 

OH NO!!!!
I hope Roxas will be alright!!!!

 

POOR ROXAS!!!!!! AND 10 MINTUES!!!! WHEN DOES IT TAKES 10 MINTUES FOR AN AMBULANCE TO COME?!??!??!?!?!?

Anyways.......... It was good. Storyline seems good, emotions are okay, dialouge is good, but you could describe the tricks and how they are feel when they are doing the tricks abit more.

GOOD JOB!

 

Well, I won't be able to write about the tricks becuase I already did, lol...and the next chapter will be up soon! I promise!

I'm already half-way through and it's a LONG chapter...

How many chapters do you have to have to submit it to the Story of the Week thingy?

 

Yay!!

I think it was limited to 3 chapters but I might be wrong..

 

That's what I thought, so the next chapter will be the last...

but don't worry, I'll make some more stories dealing with skateboarding injuries and and bike riding and what ever I think of..

 

OH NO POOR ROXAS!!! HURRY UP AMBULANCE!!
this storys really good! pm when the nxt one is out!:D:D