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  1. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    and I don't mean alcohol xD


    tried blurring the bg to try and add some depth to it. :P
    don't say that it's too bright, 'cause that's part of the composition. (If it is bright. xD)
    Also added a shade to the right so it doesn't blend with the clippiing mask too much.

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    CnC appreciated.
     
  2. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Hawt stuff but the text is hard to read
    in its current spot. Try not blur the entire building
    because it just looks messy then. Good flow and
    effects. =3
     
  3. Hissora ahurhurhur.

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    I highly displike it. The whole blurred background thing about it ruined it, really. The only good thing is the coke cans and text.
     
  4. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Made 2 new versions. One w/out a blurred background and another where some of it is blurred but not all of it. Still experimenting, so yeah, keep the CnC coming.
     
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    V3 best by far. It looks much cleaner.
     
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    V3 best by far, literally, it's cleaner, and looks better than the blurred ones. 10/10.
     
  7. Hissora ahurhurhur.

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    V3 is much better, thoughI feel there's too much going on still
     
  8. Beauxxx Destiny Islands Resident

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    The concepts and coloring are fine, but it feels as if it needs more of a setting..cars, roads, signs..people even, to give it more of a flavor.

    Otherwise, it feels flat.
    Regardless of the style
     
  9. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    You're right, a more realistic setting or surroundings would give it more flavor... I'll try into that tomorrow when I get some sleep.

    Thanks for the CnC Lady Beaux.
     
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    I very much like v3 best it looks better than the rest and it looks good enough to drink >.>
     
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    V2 is my favorite out of the three, but I agree to the previous comments -- it still feels a bit boring. My focus is going more towards the buildings than the coke can, and I feel as though the entire focal should be moved over about twenty pixels. Always always always remember the rule of thirds. The text is nice, though.

    Did you make the buildings in the background on your own?
     
  12. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yes, I must always remember the rule of thirds...and I actually had to recorrect the placement of this before but I guess it should need a 20 more pixels to the left. I'll try it out. Thanks.

    And yes. I did make those buildings. I thought it went well with the design of the coke can. (The way it was kinda vector-ish XDDDDD lol)
     
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    Oh, you vectored the entire thing? Wow, that's impressive. I couldn't do that. xD
     
  14. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    didn't vector the coke can though XD. (The coke can was a render I got off of PR)
     
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    The second version is really cool, I love how it becomes more blurry on the edges! The colors also work well together and are very pretty~​
     
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    I like the first one best.

    It's bright, and you can see everything.

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    I like the Cola cans.

    They reallt stick out, and I like it that way.

    :3
     
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    The third one seems to be my favorite. I don't like the others because of the parts that are somewhat smeared up. I don't like the sharpness and brightness of the Coke cans. I do, however, like the background and the signatures. 8/10