I like this one alot... =] I love ths shoulders and the hips.. I see a few flaws though, so don't hate me xD I think the right arm is a little long. It seems that if they were both straight, the right arm would be longer. The left leg could be a little wider.
ooh nice! i'd have to say the arm on the left (our perspective) is short, making his posture a little awkward. but overall it's a good drawing (:
this is really good, one thing, try to make the joints in the left arm seem a little more natural. right now they seem too ridgid and the entire arm seems almost robotic. other than that it looks really good.
I very much like the head, but the rest is terrible, no offense. I see you have at least a bit talent and you should not let it go to waste. I strongly suggest you study some anatomy to improve your human figure drawing.
Yeah, I know that I still have to improve but some pointers on basic parts of what's wrong really would help.
I seem to be saying this a lot today, but it would be wisest for you to try creating depth. You have the guy hanging his arm in a leaning position but it's not foreshortened at all and it seems that he's not leaning but holding his arm there awkwardly without even resting it on the thing next to him. The same applies to his legs, they both look rather flat and don't interact well with each other. One looks like doesn't connect to a thigh and just starts at the knee. The other doesn't give the impression of moving forwards, but rather straight off to the side. While I'm on the subject of the legs, I'd like to point out how disproportionately thin and short they are in relation to the body. The neck is also too thick. So, I'll give you that this was a rather difficult position to draw to begin with, but there are a lot of interaction errors that you should consider working out in the future. My best advice to you is to work on body structure starting from the skeleton and muscles, then moving onto physics of interaction with each other and the environment, that's where the problems seem to lie.
