I like the shadow on the words. Your render looks squished, the contrast is too high, and overall the composition is a bit whack.
This about sums it up. Except that I don't like the shadow; you should never use drop shadows on text unless you are a master at it. And I mean a master at it, seriously. Drop shadows are very hard to pull off and they look unprofessional at the best of times.
This is basically my view on it. You could make it better, especially making it less squished and distorted, but I think it's cool you used Weiss.