Digital Art Shut up and put your money where your mouth is.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Valium, Dec 9, 2008.

  1. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thats what you get for waking up in Vegas :3 God i love that song.
    ANYWAY back to business. I'm all sigged out now i've made to many in a the timespan of a day. CnC my sorry A**

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  2. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    The effects are very well done, however, the sides do need more color where it's just black. Great job overall though. 9/10
     
  3. Defame King's Apprentice

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    I like the effects in the background; who's the dude?
     
  4. bttp9999 Destiny Islands Resident

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    1) Ew scanlines.
    2) Ew typography.
    3) That bright and overly contrasted area makes me go >:l
     
  5. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    CRITIQUE!!!!! YOU GAVE CRITIQUE!!! PRAISE YOU!! Now i can finally improve on the areas in which i was failing.
     
  6. bttp9999 Destiny Islands Resident

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    I can't tell if this serious or sarcastic.
     
  7. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Its a mixture of both.... Mostly sincere though.
     
  8. Defame King's Apprentice

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    But I still think you did a great job;
     
  9. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    I said you needed color in th black parts. I'm a bit of a critique, but mainly an admirer.
     
  10. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    You give critique but it comes in too small of a dose. For me anyway xD.
     
  11. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    That is called "Negative space" <_<.

    But yeah, onto Cnc, I have to agree, get rid of scanlines, you have been using them in lots of your latest tags and they have becomed kind of a boring effect.

    Also as usual the contrast needs work XD.

    Good job though.
     
  12. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Always a reliable source Laplace xD. Thanking you for Critique.
     
  13. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yeah, text needs work and the scanlines should not be there. :/

    Other than that, it's pretty good. =D
     
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    Looks nice, TF. The only thing I'd say is wrong with it is that the text comes too low so that 'world' is kind of sliced into. I'd consider raising the text slightly up so that it's not cut off there. Otherwise, great job!
     
  15. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    Looks pretty good to me! Nice firey red effects in there. Makes it look cool. But I would have to agree about the negative space around the edges. But that's probably how you intended for it to be. :D Good job.