~Chapter 1~ “Ground, sea and sky…That’s this world’s main elements…” Said a boy as he stared out his living room window, “I want to get out there and experience those elements!” “But, for now, you have to eat dinner.” The boy looked back from the window and saw his mom standing in the doorway. “But, mom! I was just-“ “I know, Shrii, but you can’t be late for school…AGAIN!” “Aww, mom…How did you know I was skipping?” He asked in a whiny tone. “You know how you told them that you’re grandma died? Next time, say your grandPA died…You used that excuse 5 times…” She replied with a smirk. “You never know…I could have more than 5.” “And they also called to ask if it was true. Now get moving” “Yes’m…” The boy, Shrii Kenyo walked out of the room and into the kitchen where he found his breakfast on the table, “why can’t I just get off this island and go somewhere…” “Follow…the…light…” Came a voice from what seemed, all around him. “Who’s there!?” Shrii screamed as he stood up, pushing the chair backwards. “Don’t pull that now, Shrii! Get going!” His mom pushed him downstairs and outside with his school stuff and he walked towards his school. Halfway to the school he heard a voice behind him. “Shrii! Wait up!” It was a girl about his height. “Hm? Oh, hey, Kin!” H smiled at her an kept on walking. “What’s up?” She asked as she positioned herself beside him. “Nothing much…went insane this morning.” He said as he looked up towards the clouds. “The sky…” He said to himself as he accidentally walked into a tree. “Aw, darn it!” He rubbed his nose as Kin helped him up, “thanks…” “No problem…What’s on your mind, anyways?” She replied and asked him. “N-nothing…” He replied as always. But this time he was blushing because he looked stupid in front of his friend. First let me take this time to introduce the main characters: Shrii Kenyo, male, 16 years old Birthdate: February 3rd, 1992 Looks: Jet black hair, fluffy hair, and Blue eyes that occasionally look almost red. He stands at about 5’9” and wears a black shirt and a grey jacket saying “Imadene” on it. He wears a pair of camo jeans that are just the right size. He also wears Skate shoes that are fitting. He has one of those personalities that no one wants to have for their whole life: Nice yet mean at times, Happy yet depressing, Gentle yet harsh, and sweet yet obnoxious. He has a certain thing for one of his friends. Kinrya Shinri, female, 16 years old Birthdate: February 14th, 1992 Looks: Long, black hair down to halfway through her arm, sweet blue eyes with green speckles. She stands at around 5’8” or so and doesn’t easily back down when others face her. She wears tight blue jeans, and a black top with, also, a grey jacket. The shoes are pretty much the same as Shrii’s. Her personality is that of a protector. She never backs down from a fight if she is protecting her friends. She also has a thing for Shrii. Neither of them knows about their feelings. She often looks up to Shrii for his endurance and courage, but in the long run, Shrii looks up to her for her defence and everything else. That is the character list so far. Mind you, there WILL be more added. “Um…Shrii?” Kin asked Shrii with a hesitation in her voice. “What’s up?” He replied quietly. “Is something wrong…You know you can—“ “NOTHING IS WRONG!” He snapped at her while interrupting, “…” He was breathing heavily now and saw the tears in her eyes. “K-Kin…” He stared into her hurt eyes and said, “I’m…Sorry…I shouldn’t have…I’m sorry.” Kin stared back at him and said, “It’s…fine, Shrii…but please…if I can help…” At that point he heard it again: “Follow…the…light” Shrii stopped and looked around. “Who’s there?!” He screamed and looked around. “Um…Shrii? Are you okay?” Shrii stared over at her and said, “I don’t know…” “It’s him, alright…” A mysterious man in a cloak said to a person beside him. “But…how do you know?” The other one replied. “I just know.” Shrii turned around only to see the two were gone. “I could’ve sworn…” “SHRII! COME ONE! We’re gonna be late!” ~End of Chapter 1~ Please rate it! I wanna know if I did good!
the begining was funny about the grandma and grandpa thing and I now know what the main characters look like I can't wait for more 10/10
Thanks! I gotta find out where it's all going first of all... I kinda improvised the whole thing -sweatdrop- I have a bit of a storyline in my head. Just as a small add-in for the first and second chapter and POSSIBLY the third one... I have a rough sketch of what Shrii looks like. Unfortuantely, PhotoBucket is being a butt and won't upload it for me.
I like it how he dreams as Riku would, get of the island and explore. I'd usually bring a notebook or a paper to keep the storyline with me and then type it out lastly edit it out.
Hokay, So...I finally got off my lazy whatchamuhcallit and wrote my next chapter...enjoy! Where we left off “Wha…what the?” Kin was worried so she ran to the school and slammed the doors. “What is it, young lady?” An old woman of about 63 said as she opened the door. “M-my friend! He is hurt bad!” She said as they ran there only to see Shrii standing up without any scratches or anything. Shrii saw the teacher and glared. “H-hi, miss Womma!” He said nervously. And now...back to the story “What are you trying to pull, Kin?” Miss Womma asked. “H-he was cut and torn and…and…and…” Kin stuttered as she explained it. “he WAS…” “I’m sorry, Miss Womma, I lost my pet dog a while ago and…” Miss Womma just stared at him and raised her eyebrow. “And…did I mention you look lovely today?” He said with a nervous chuckle. “Is that a new hair? CUT, I meant hairCUT!” He said about to slam his head into the wall. “Son, are you looking for detention?” Miss Womma asked. “because if you are…” “It’s room 201. Right?” He asked with a smile. Kin chuckled at his stupidity, even though she knew it was intentional. “But my dog is out there and I need to find him!” Shrii yelled loudly with fake tears coming down. “C-calm down son…We’ll find him!” Miss Womma said quietly. “Me and Kin will go this way!” He pointed to the forest and they went that-a-way. “But…Aw, not again! They tricked me!” Miss Womma shouted. “Shrii get BACK HERE! PRONTO!” Shrii had grabbed Kin and was running faster than he could remember. “Shrii! That was stupid! You shouldn’t have run off like that! Go back and—“ Kin got interrupted by Shrii kissing her. “That better?” Shrii asked with a smug smile. “…W-well…” Kin couldn’t respond. “Then let’s go!” He grabbed her and put her on his back and ran into the street and lost the teacher. “Hang on tighter!” Shrii yelled back to her. “Um…why?” Kin asked as she did so anyway. “Hehe…” He just laughed softly as he ran to the edge of the street and jumped off a cliff with a 100ft drop. “SHRII! WHAT THE HECK IS YOUR PROBLEM!” Kin screamed as they fell down. Upon falling, they hit a few rocks and didn’t notice one thing: there was another 500ft drop after that. “Oh bloody…OOF!” He kept hitting rocks, but holding Kin close so she wouldn’t get hurt. Something started happening to Shrii, though. His pupils went white. “Sh-shrii?” Kin asked, seeing his eyes.
Okay, I will ^^ Oh and here it is Chapter 5 (I thnik) Where we left off “SHRII! WHAT THE HECK IS YOUR PROBLEM!” Kin screamed as they fell down. Upon falling, they hit a few rocks and didn’t notice one thing: there was another 500ft drop after that. “Oh bloody…OOF!” He kept hitting rocks, but holding Kin close so she wouldn’t get hurt. Something started happening to Shrii, though. His pupils went white. “Sh-shrii?” Kin asked, seeing his eyes. And now...back to the story “What!?” Shrii couldn’t figure out what was happening, but time slowed down to a stop and he kept falling and falling, until something happened…they stopped. “What…happened?” Kin asked as she looked up. “I don’t know…” Shrii looked down and saw he was standing on air. “…This is…weird…” “Goes beyond weird…” Kin replied to him. “Gets even weirder too.” A voice said from behind them “Hm? Oh!” Shrii looked behind them and saw Miss Womma there. “Wait…how are you…” “Floating? I’m not…this is the boundary line of your world…and you must not live…” She pulled out a katana and ran towards them. “GO!” He said, pushing Kin away and grabbing the sword. “Not a chance! You can hurt me…but not my friends!” Shrii said, his eyes going blue and red in the iris. “Especially her.” He said with a smile. “Shrii?” Kin asked. Observing him a bit, she saw he wasn’t himself. Or at least, a different side of him she never knew existed. “Well, then…I guess you die by your girlfriend!” The woman exclaimed. She put her hand in her hair for a sec, reaching for something. Shrii got ready for a projectile, but instead, she was unzipping something…She was unzipping…herself? “Um…ew…” Shrii said, watching this lady doing something. “Oh relax…it’s an exo-skeleton” She exclaimed, taking the exo-skeleton off, to reveal a person about 16 years old. “I’ve been sent to make sure you never found out about this boundary line…” “And, oh, how that worked out for you all.” Shrii said stomping his foot on the line. “Now, really…What are you?” He asked her, raising an eyebrow. “Heh. I’m a female.” She replied with a smile. “No shucks, Sherlock. I meant, what are you and who are you? You’re not Miss Womma.” He asked with a twitching eye. “Well, Watson, I’m a worker at the EHPTeam.” She replied with a wink. “EHPT?” he asked. “What’s that mean?” “Earth Hologram Projection Team.” She replied in a second, then she looked concerned and worried. “Oh no! I told you! I’m gonna be punished for this!” She said sounding extremely scared. “Um…For what? And by who?” Kin asked her. “Because you told us?” “YA! I’m not allowed to say anything!” She said in a high pitched voice. “…If you two help me out of this, I’ll be eternally grateful. My name is Khail (Kay-eel).” Shrii thought for a second before a black hole appeared behind Khail. “Uh?” Khail said before getting stabbed through the stomach with a beam of light. Blood splattered on Shrii. “Holy…Jesus is almighty…” He said, covering up for a swear. “What was that?” Out of nowhere, a katana appeared in his hand. “...” He stared for a second before smiling. “I fight now.” He ran to the light and cut it in half, making it bleed dark purple ooze. “What...the...heck?” “Gamga (Gam-guh)... it’s the stuff that powers our organisations PowerFly.” Khail said, looking at Shrii, who was staring blankly at her with his blue and red eyes. “It sucks the life force out of someone totally after 30 seconds.” She explained, putting her hand on her face and one on her hip. “So...You DID betray us, number 7.” A voice said from behind her. “You shall pay dearly for that.”
