Short poem

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Azure Flame, Aug 7, 2007.

  1. Azure Flame Banned

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    A short and stupid poem I thought of at work. It's called Oh Yes.

    Oh yes oh yes oh yes,
    You must confess
    They've come to arrest.
    Oh what a mess,
    oh yes oh yes oh yes.​
     
  2. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Very Artistic!


    I Liked It ^^
     
  3. FUZZY SWEATER Hollow Bastion Committee

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    very beautiful
    and everything rhymed
     
  4. Azure Flame Banned

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    Thank you both very much! :D
     
  5. W7F King's Apprentice

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    I didn't think it was stupid. It wasn't bad at all. makes me wish stuff like that will just come to me, normally takes me forever to think up even the simplest topic..