Short Poem of the Fulfillment of my Dream

The fulfillment of my dream
This beautiful longing
My wish on a shooting star
A fervent desire
In my heart, dancing flames
Arousing the passion within me
My craving, a temptation
Of my ambitious aspirations
Oh, how my soul is yearning
For the fulfillment of my dream

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Another short poem I wrote when I was younger...during that time, I just wrote this for fun, so I didn't really want anything at the moment. XD Anyway, I hope you like it! :)​

 

short, simple=absolutely beautiful. It's very artistic and descriptive. Gd job.

 

Thanks! :) I'm glad you like it!! :glomp:​

 

Little short but still good.....good free verse......good motivational atmosphere......good first poem......

 

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! :)​

 

I love your word choice.

It's another damn amazing poem by you.

Short but sweet.

It's a great concept to write about.


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