She Was Only 5 (Sad Poem)

Her dad was a drunk
Her mom was an addict
Her parents kept her
Locked in an attic

Her only friend
was a little toy bear
It was old and worn out
And had patches of hair

She always talked to it
When no one's around
She lays there and hugs it
Not a peep of sound

Until her parents
Unlock the door
Some more and more pain
She'll have to endure

A bruise on her leg
A scar on her face
Why is she in
In such a horrible place?

But she grabs her bear
And softly cries
She loves her parents
But they want her to die

She sits in the corner
Quiet but thinking,
'Please God, why is
My life always sinking?

Such a bad life
For a sad little kid
She'd get beaten and beaten
For anything she did

Then one night
Her mom came home high
And the poor child was beaten
As hours went by

Then her mom
Grabbed for a blade
It was sharp and pointy
One that she made

She thrusted the blade
Right in the girls chest,
'You deserve to die
You worthless piece of ****!

The mom walked out
Leaving the girl slowly dieing
She grabbed her bear
And again started crying

Police showed up
At the small little house
Then quickly barged in
Everything quiet as a mouse

One officer slowly
Opened a door
To find the little girl
Lying dead on the floor

It must have been bad
To go through so much harm
But at least she died
With her best friend in her arms..

 

Thats so sad... Im close to crying. Great job :D

 

that is so sad...can I use it 4 a no chiled abuse speach I'm doing?

 

Indeed, that was quite sad.

It was very good... well written. You have the ablity to get a point across and correctly rhyme; well done.

 

This reminds me of last year at school, they passed around a poem about child abuse in my computer class.

Great poem.

"But at least she died
With her best friend in her arms.."

;-; that's really sad...

 

That was unbelieveably horrible. Makes me sad since I slapped my sister. I'm crying right now.

 

Hmm...I've seen this before. :/ It's a good poem anyways.

 

Wow, what an excellent, yet sad poem...does it have a hidden meaning behind it?

 

Oh wow. That's so sad. I cried a bit from reading this. ;-; Good Job

 

*coughs myspace coughs*

I love this poem though

I saw it about 2 weeks ago

 

Not to be mean. But I don't think you wrote this.