Seldom

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Aura, Dec 6, 2009.

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  1. Arch Mana Knight

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    I liked the chapter. I already pointed out a small thing that needed to be fixed. Interesting characters. @-@ I kinda thought you had already finished with the flashback/other life thing already. 8D8 Guess not.
     
    Arch, Jul 26, 2010
    Arch, Jul 26, 2010
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  2. Symphony Moogle Assistant

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    I'm not even sure how to begin. First, for your sake and mine, I won't start from the very beginning of reading this and critique it up until now. I wouldn't want to take up a full thread page with ranting and raving about how much I love this story.

    You are amazingly talented, and I do hope that you continue writing as you've told me you intended to do. Along with somewhat emotional side-effects, the story brings out feelings of joy as well. I'm very glad I stumbled upon this piece for that. (And also because, had I not, I would have never met you. <3) Keep writing. I'll always be a fan. <3
     
    Symphony, Jul 28, 2010
    Symphony, Jul 28, 2010
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  3. Aura Goddess

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    Well...I have nothing really to say except I guess you got what you wanted. XDX

    Thank you...

    Well...since khv died, I had to re-update. B| Nothing really to say. The amount of dialogue was intentional.

    Any mistakes, do tell. Update.    ​
     
    Aura, Sep 25, 2010
    Aura, Sep 25, 2010
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