Please move if this is the wrong area. It's KH related so. ;; Also I know some of the chronology as far as the game goes is whack. It just sounded nice this way. Made for a project with making sedentary activities sound exciting. x, a chime at the twist of my fingers stairs of mulitcoloured glass fade beneath my feet as i sprint upward mosaic floor and silence converge the lightning-bug-lit tower rumbles a whirr between my hands and my blade enters them the darkside - heart shaped hole in its chest like someone's been playing cookie cutters on refrence sheets (again) it staggers forward, lazy, raw power dragging one enormous arm forth sliding left, i dodge it a dark pool opens beneath i sink in with one last swing of the keyblade have i lost? across the screen, gold plated letters kingdom hearts
I like it. It has a mystery feeling to it as you have to think about what is happening. Your work is quite unique and I hope you make some more.
This is a really good piece (though you are right, it is in the wrong section and will be moved by a mod) The way you express what happened in your poem is very great. You have a lot of good vocabulary choices (fan of vocab ^_^) You should keep up the great work and I can't wait to hear more from you ^_^
