...my third of the night >_> I have no idea where my head is at xDDD *** Scarlet sky lies overhead Tension rising As the sun sinks Sinks below the horizon Below the horizon Of this cruel cold place This cruel cold place That has stolen so much Has stolen so much That it is a daily fight It is a daily fight to survive The ones who have been lost Their names just dust on the wind Nothing more, Nothing less Except a memory to the ones who are left The night still comes And the dawn still follows A last sign of normality A reminder of the days before When this cold cruel place Was so much more than what it is now Fire burns the land Ice melts away Melts like the life that once existed Water consumes all Whilst the Air chokes everything it reaches Increasing heat builds higher and higher Colours fade away lost forever Lost to a world of yellows and browns Delicate Misty haze sweeps everything, The ones who are left stare at the scarlet sky They look at each other in fear The same look on each of their faces The same thought in all of their minds “What have we done?” *** I have no idea where this piece came from, I think it was whilst writing an essay on how Humans are affecting the planet, it made me think about how the world would be if we carry on destroying it at the rate we are.
Dun have much to say, that I haven't said about your other poems. *Pulls out ginormous Thesaurus* Epic...Epic...Epic... Ah HAH! Short Story, Saga, titanic, astronomical, everything-CtR-says-or-does, legend, narative. . . Hmm, this list is kinda long.
This one amazed me. This one's good. But I agree with the CHOOSEN one. I like your others one better. Really sorry T.T
*hugs* again lol don't appologise xDD This one I think is weaker because all of my other work is based on emotions and feelings ^^ This one doesn't really have that xD Thanks ^^ Thanks :)
