Saw

OOC: All right? But that's not a good thing...which I am trying to see what I can do, other than drop her.

 

OOC: Okay, you do what ya want, but she's gotta get down there somehow and get all the keys and stuff. I has an idea!

BIC:

Jordyn looked down, and saw the drop. If she could land it just right, she wouldn't end up in the needles.
"Hey, lower me and swing me to your.. right... I'll jump down and get the keys! I'll miss the pit," she said.

 

OOC: What happened?

 

OOC: Perfect. xD

Bic: Jacob nodded and started to swing her to the right. He started to sweat, his hands were sweating too. Not a good time to sweat now! He threw her to the right. He didn't know if she made it, he just got back away from the pit and lied on his back, breathing hard.

 

OOC: Wow. I don't know where to bring my character in.

 

OOC: OMG you should read it, it's very interesting xD
Jordyn ran off after that one guy shot himself, because she was scared. Jacob ran after her, and got a phone call. Jordyn ended up getting trapped in a door less like room, where a wall came down, starting to close together. Jacob had to decide which switch to pull, and he yelled at Jordyn to pull hers. She did and the walls stopped. Jacob then got another call saying that she only had an hour of air left, and he had to get her out himself. He found a key slot and found another key, putting it in. he didnt' know whether or not it would close all the way together or open it, so he took a chance and they came up and she was safe. They then figured out what they have in common, that their siblings killed their parents, then Jordyn got a call about a trap door going to open beneath her feet into a pit of needles, it opened and she grabbed the sides... Jacob is trying to pull her up.


BIC: Jordyn felt his hands leave hers. And she pushed her body as he let go. She saw the large pit underneath her, and she hope'd she'd miss it. The ground was coming closer, and the pit was still under her. She hit the sides, holding on, almost falling in. She lifted herself up and looked at the middle of the pit, seeing the key in the middle of the needles. It was sticking out like a sore thumb. She looked up at the light from the trap door. It was purely dark down there except for that.
"I made it!" she shouted. The only thing visible from the trapdoor, was her face in the light. Her body looked engulfed in the darkness

 

"Guys?" he called, walking around and looking for them. He sighed, he fell asleep and they left him alone.

 

Jacob sighed, a greatful sigh, the one thing he counted on, her being safe. "Okay, now, get that k-" He heard a phone ring, not the one he busted, Jordyn's.

 

He heard a phone ring and ran towards the sound, not seeing the hole where the trapdoor was.

 

Jordyn watched the ceiling, where the tapping came from. She knew it had to Harold running.
"Don't Fall down the trap door!" she shouted. She also heard the ringing but it was faint. She looked around for it, but then forgot, she dropped it it up there. She didn't know whether or not she broke the rules. She took a deep breath, and waited for Jacob to either answer the phone, or to throw it down to her.

 

Harold barely heard her and slid, unfortunately, he was too late and slid off the edge. He fell in but grabbed a ledge.

 

Jacob looked to where her phone was, he picked it up. He answered it, waiting for Jigsaw's voice.

OOC: You'd best make the new game rules now, Renesmee.

 

"Hello Jacob.. Has Jordyn been a good girl following my rules? I think not. She was supposed to fall in the needles, like a good little girl.... And now, you have to choice of jumping in, and getting the keys while you watch her die, or let her fall in. Her exact weight triggers the panel underneath the pit, letting the staircase open. She must suffer to stay alive Jacob...... But if she stays in too long, she'll slowly start dying.... And the only way to get down is for the staircase to open...." and at those words. The trap door close. Now, it was pitch dark.

Jordyn gasped, seeing Harold grab the ledge. Her heart rested softly.
"Don't fall! Try to pull yourself up and break through the trap door!" she said. She looked around, and then took a deep breath. She took a running jump over the pit, seeing nothing. It was too dark. She landed on the other side. The ground rumbled and she yelped out, almost falling in after losing her balance.

 

"I can't see and my grip is slipping!" he said, scared.

 

Darren was running towards a bunch of commotion he had heard.
"Is that you...puppet?" he asked, walking through a doorway.
Suddenly, it seemed that his feet weren't stepping on anything. There was no ground. Quickly, he had grabbed on to a ledge, hoping to climb out. Instead, the floor above him shut close, and he could hear the voices of those around him. The puppet obviously had something to do with this...

 

Jacob looked at the trap door shut. "Ba*tard! How the hell am I suppose to do this?! You give no clues, you give nothing but pain, what the hell do you want from us!?" He screamed it straight at himself, the phone was silent, the battery died. "Great, you better not make it to where she dies too early!" He screamed and threw the phone to the wall next to him, how was he going to get this figured out. "Jordyn, a platform you're on, if you are on one, opens the staircase, but that's not all, you stay on that platform, you die easily, I don't get what he meant by tha-" He heard a low rumble coming from the trap door. "Jordyn!"

OOC: I'm thinking of something evil, yet, I don't want to get too directional about it, honestly, plus, it's gonna be gruesome, now this is gonna get people on edge.

Bic: Jacob heard the floor, where the trap door was, the floor beneath him started moving. "No.... What the hell?! It's a fu*king....its a...needle wall! Jordyn, you gotta get out of there, right now!" He scremed it, but chould she hear him like the wall from before?

 

Darren was now becoming anxious. His phone rang, but he didn't answer.
"Let me out of here!!!" he angrily shouted, trying to see even a glimpse of something in this dark pit.

 

Jordyn lost her balance in the needle bit. The ground moved underneath her. It felt like an earthquake, but it wasn't so destructive. She fell backwards, landing in the needle pit. She let out gasps or pain.
"Ah," she said, writhing around. She tried sitting up. She cried out and felt something sting in her arm. She reached her hand out, grabbing the key. She looked to the side, seeing the staircase open, and the needle pit starting to close above her. She cried out.
"No!" she yelled. She was in too much pain to move. She threw the key out, and heard it hit the wall. She sat up, seeing the trap closing, inch by inch every few seconds. She cried out.

 

Jacob couldn't move, his legs were still, his pupils dialated, he couldn't move. "Jordyn...I...I..." He couldn't get the words out, he fell to his knees.

 

Jordyn moved the needles around. Knowing Jigsaw, he must've had a hidden switch. She only hoped that she was right. Every prick in her finger stung, and she felt so horrible, even sick... She found a gray switch. She pushed it, looking as the trap stopped. The lights came on, as bright as ever, and she could see the large pit of needles. Almost every inch of her body was pricked with the needles. She was shaking, and crying. She wanted out. She moved slightly. She pulled herself out, barely. She half walked, half crawled away, and pulled a few needles out, then laid on her back, crying. She didn't want to pull the next twenty or thirty needles out of her arms or legs.