Alright, so here's a little story in progress I'm doing. There are a couple small flaws in it still, but I figure I might post what I have so far. Will continue if support is given. Also, as a forewarning, this contains strong religious overtones that some people may not like. As the story progresses, it may have graphic violence, I don't know, I haven't really worked it out that far yet. Spoiler Prologue (Chapter 0) RE:Create Earth. It is a delicate and intricate system of balances, designed perfectly for life. These balances dictate the way life is lived, and even the nature of that life. We were there when those balances shattered. He was the one who created everything. As He did so, He created us. We reside in the heavens, in the perfect paradise. They would call us "angels." They see heaven as a perfect place. We can't tell them any different. We don't want them to know. Who are they? They call themselves "humans." When He created them, they were simple. They could move, eat, and breathe. And He was happy. He loved them so much, he gave them a great gift. He gave them the potential to be anything. And that they did, they grew larger and stronger, faster and smarter, and he loved them all the same. But they eventually became so intelligent, they demanded their independence from Him. And He loved them so much that he could do nothing but agree. They were left, and they began to grow like never before. They created new and strange things, things that upset and destroyed the balances that He had put there for them. They continually weighted one side of the balance, paying no heed to the other. They were the ones who shattered the balances. And we love them too, we don't want the shards to cut them. We'd like to think it's not too late. We'd probably be wrong. Spoiler Okay, I don't like it all that much. But we're not even into the plotline yet, so I think that I can let it by this once. Also, those problems I was talking about earlier? I have no name for the main character yet. I'm totally open to suggestions.
I actually like this well enough. The religious overtones, which are in no way understated in your warning, and all. I must say that I want to see what you do with this and won't try to interfere because it'd probably be for the worse. Well I'm sure you'll come up with something. My only suggestions are make the names significant in some way even if it is through a pun, just not too obviously I suppose and try not to get too caught up in any single notion or plot idea. I'm sure I was no help at all so I'll just stop making myself look silly.
