Saix....has...a......KID????

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  1. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    I agree. >_<
     
  2. Sumi suicidé

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    Yes...I agree, I have cancelled many a story due to Writer's Block. It sucks balls dude.

    I think i might have an inspi. tho

    a memory of saix and larxene's wedding!? or maybe not...:stupid:
     
  3. Firekeyblade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    That's actually not a bad idea........
     
  4. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Hmmmmmm
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    OMFG! I LOVE YOU SOO MUCH!
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    Memory tiem!
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    -next chapter will be out soon!-
     
  5. dyyor Destiny Islands Resident

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    the story is great!

    no offense though, saix's sumbody was isa and he was an apprentice of ansem the wise >.> also in one of ur chapters u kept on calling axel VII, he is VIII

    is great still ^^
     
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    heh can't wait!

    And thank to the dude!!!
     
  7. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I know, I learn from mah mistakes.
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    Chapter 8
    The Wedding ~ Short and sweet~<3


    Ansem stood at the alter. Sai was in his tux. Larxene walked down the isle in her wedding dress. The Sirt part was all poofy and the top decorated with little beads in an electic pattern. Her Hair was normal but she had little white ribbons where the antennei started, and a small tiara. Her veil was down, but you could tell there were tears of joy in her eye's. she stood neext to Sai.
    "We arew gathered here today for the marrage of Sai and Ralene!"
    Ansem said all the preisty Stuff.
    'Do you, Sai take Ralene to be your wedded wife, through sickness and health, until death'
    'I Do'
    'Do you, Ralene take Sai to be your Husband, through sickness and health, until death'
    'I..I do!"
    'You may now kiss the bride'
    Sai raised Ralene's veil and-


    Lex opened her eye's.
    "Mum and Dads wedding, short and Sweet~" She smiled.

    <3
     
  8. Fruity~ Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Lulz. Nice wedding. =D Continue it! :noworries:
     
  9. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    WOW! A story of Sai'x and Larxene's WEdding! :3 Keep up the good work! I love this part already.
     
  10. Wulphie! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Okay y'know I got bored once I read the title -Meanwhile-.You should pep up the story some.
     
  11. Sumi suicidé

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    Yay! that was really good.I enjoyed reading it 'cause i could picture it
     
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    That was nice.....a few spelling mistakes but I can deal......"Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to witness the....something...of...." yeah I can't say the wedding speech.....but I know there was more to it than what you typed of course....something about holy matrimony?....maybe without the holy part....and something about lawful wedded wife in sickness, in health and.....something else......ah well....it's a very long speech but that's all right.
     
  13. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Meh, I cant do the wedding thing!
    >.<
    Even though I've been to varous weddings in 07 and 08.
    xDDD

    <333

    Oh I will~
    -evil grin-

    Lol, You gave me the idea!
    ^_^

    -.-
    Try making a story like
    OMG!
    With writers block!
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    READ OTHER POSTS AND YOU WOILL REALISE I HAVE IT!
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    Everybody else likes it, but your entitled to your own opinion.
    And I'm only 11 so gimme a break, I've only started writing.
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    I cant write a story to YOUR likings. I need to think of others aswell.
     
  14. Sumi suicidé

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    I'm 11 too! cool! PEOPLE MY AGE!!!
     
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    O.o......you're 11?.........oh great....n 11 year old write better than me.......wonderful.....*sigh*....well.....I suppose it's a good thing for you.
     
  16. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Lulz..
    11 FTW
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    Just because I'm younger and people like my sotry doesnt mean we could like YOUT story.
    I never really check in the creativity corner unless I'm posting this sotry, So you could give me a link and I'll glady read aNY of your stories..
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  17. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Wow. An eleven year old girl writing. Seems shocking to me although I'm 14.
     
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  19. Sumi suicidé

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    being an 11 yr. old doesn't change anything. I'm actually 12 now, but my fondest memories are as an 11yr. old. also: please write more!!! this thread has been down for monts and I don't want this story to die!!!
     
  20. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Omgchapternineisfinallyoutsoyouguisebetterbescream ingomgwooo!!!!!!!--.--;;!!!!!!!!!!!

    >_>
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    I just woke up, Im tired.
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    Chapter 9 – Final Goodbyes.


    Lex awoke and felt better…
    “Larxene?†She looked at her mum and smiled. Larxene was asleep on a chair.
    Lex stood up quietly and walked down the hall. Oblivious to her Axel was standing against a wall.
    “Oi, XIV†Lex growled and turned. Oddly enough Axel smiled
    “You’re dad told us about that incident, If that happened to anybody else, Nobody would of cared and they would of faded. I guess you’re okay†He said. Axel turned his back and walked away. She watched Axel walk away.
    She turned her back and walked downstairs. Saix wasn’t in the kitchen. She looked for her dad but he was nowhere. She went into his room but no Saix to be found.
    “Where is he?†She muttered. She saw a small note…

    “Dear Lex,
    I’m sorry, but I’m leaving…I need to go do something…I’ll be back soon†She read aloud. “Where is he going?†She scrunched up the letter and threw it al the wall.
    “Where…?â€


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