Sadness

Wanting to run away from this pain
As the sorrow fills my heart
I try to smile but all I can do is cry
I feel the hole getting bigger
Pulling me in deeper
I try to get out
But this pain is just too real

Won’t somebody come and take away my pain
I don’t know, how long I can keep going
Before I will give in
To this sadness that is in my heart

Again this is for Gharanth

 

i absolutely LOVE your poems!!!!!!!!:D

 

I totally agree with sora59. That was a sad lonely poem, and touched my heart.

 

Thanks you two, I can always count on you, to enjoy my poems

 

F*ck...........
This is definatly your best until now and for me it greatly passes the other!
Again good job. I might even use it in a sig xD

 

Thanks Axe, I'm sure it'll look great in a sig

 

Wow, this poem is amazing... such great description of the pain and sadness in the heart. 10/10

 

Isn't it strang? How so many people can relate to something? Once again,I feel a connection to it. I loved it! Great job!! (Soon,we'll need a poem form,lol).

 

Wow... I felt that one...

So much power... TT^TT

Here's 10 stars... Now, if you're excuse me... I've got something in my eye... ;_;

*runs off, sobbing*

 

That was beautiful! :]
You're such a good poet! 10/10 :)